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[Lady Sedia Auvryarn]

Ritzy_freak

Link to the story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4646358/1/A_flaw_in_the_plan
Fandom: Harry Potter
Summary: Peter Pettigrew had everything he could have wanted. A woman he loved, a job, and a place in the new revolution. Everything changed when the woman he loved followed her dreams for the man she loved.
Genre and eventual pairings: Romance/Drama. The pairings are OC/Peter, James/Lily, And Later OC/Sirius
Warnings: Rated PG-13 for OC's potty mouth
Notes on any aspects you're interested in receiving feedback about and/or anything else you feel is pertinent: I'd like to know if my characters are well devloped
Brief excerpt of the story:

Peter sighed, waiting nervously at King’s cross. His girlfriend of almost one year was coming back from Hogwarts for Christmas. She had accepted his offer to spend Christmas with him and he could imagine their Christmas already, just the two of them. At nineteen, he was sure that Iris was the woman he wanted to spend the rest of his life with. She was everything he ever wanted, beauty, intelligence, humor. She didn’t even mind his akwardness.

His thoughts were cut off by the train coming in. His hand tightened over the flowers he bought for her. The ring in his pocket burned. He watched the line of people filtering out. Peter watched as students ran to their parents and guardians.

Fandoms and genres you're willing to read for in return:
Anything really. I was going to do the person who posted before me.

Welcome! smile If it is character depth in HP your looking for then I am probably the best one here to talk to haha lots of experience there... but I can't read it right this second cause I am working on some stuff of my own so I'll take a look at it in a day or so k? biggrin but feel free to enjoy one of my stories in the mean time and/or get some more reviews from others!

[Ritzy_freak]

Lady Sedia Auvryarn

Ritzy_freak

Link to the story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4646358/1/A_flaw_in_the_plan
Fandom: Harry Potter
Summary: Peter Pettigrew had everything he could have wanted. A woman he loved, a job, and a place in the new revolution. Everything changed when the woman he loved followed her dreams for the man she loved.
Genre and eventual pairings: Romance/Drama. The pairings are OC/Peter, James/Lily, And Later OC/Sirius
Warnings: Rated PG-13 for OC's potty mouth
Notes on any aspects you're interested in receiving feedback about and/or anything else you feel is pertinent: I'd like to know if my characters are well devloped
Brief excerpt of the story:

Peter sighed, waiting nervously at King’s cross. His girlfriend of almost one year was coming back from Hogwarts for Christmas. She had accepted his offer to spend Christmas with him and he could imagine their Christmas already, just the two of them. At nineteen, he was sure that Iris was the woman he wanted to spend the rest of his life with. She was everything he ever wanted, beauty, intelligence, humor. She didn’t even mind his akwardness.

His thoughts were cut off by the train coming in. His hand tightened over the flowers he bought for her. The ring in his pocket burned. He watched the line of people filtering out. Peter watched as students ran to their parents and guardians.

Fandoms and genres you're willing to read for in return:
Anything really. I was going to do the person who posted before me.

Welcome! smile If it is character depth in HP your looking for then I am probably the best one here to talk to haha lots of experience there... but I can't read it right this second cause I am working on some stuff of my own so I'll take a look at it in a day or so k? biggrin but feel free to enjoy one of my stories in the mean time and/or get some more reviews from others!

I'd love to review ones of your storys, but wheres the link?

[Lady Sedia Auvryarn]

Ritzy_freak

Lady Sedia Auvryarn

Ritzy_freak

Link to the story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4646358/1/A_flaw_in_the_plan
Fandom: Harry Potter
Summary: Peter Pettigrew had everything he could have wanted. A woman he loved, a job, and a place in the new revolution. Everything changed when the woman he loved followed her dreams for the man she loved.
Genre and eventual pairings: Romance/Drama. The pairings are OC/Peter, James/Lily, And Later OC/Sirius
Warnings: Rated PG-13 for OC's potty mouth
Notes on any aspects you're interested in receiving feedback about and/or anything else you feel is pertinent: I'd like to know if my characters are well devloped
Brief excerpt of the story:

Peter sighed, waiting nervously at King’s cross. His girlfriend of almost one year was coming back from Hogwarts for Christmas. She had accepted his offer to spend Christmas with him and he could imagine their Christmas already, just the two of them. At nineteen, he was sure that Iris was the woman he wanted to spend the rest of his life with. She was everything he ever wanted, beauty, intelligence, humor. She didn’t even mind his akwardness.

His thoughts were cut off by the train coming in. His hand tightened over the flowers he bought for her. The ring in his pocket burned. He watched the line of people filtering out. Peter watched as students ran to their parents and guardians.

Fandoms and genres you're willing to read for in return:
Anything really. I was going to do the person who posted before me.

Welcome! smile If it is character depth in HP your looking for then I am probably the best one here to talk to haha lots of experience there... but I can't read it right this second cause I am working on some stuff of my own so I'll take a look at it in a day or so k? biggrin but feel free to enjoy one of my stories in the mean time and/or get some more reviews from others!

I'd love to review ones of your storys, but wheres the link?

there is a link in my sig or in the second post of this thread in the story archives smile

[milila]

Ritzy_freak

Lady Sedia Auvryarn

Ritzy_freak

Link to the story: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4646358/1/A_flaw_in_the_plan
Fandom: Harry Potter
Summary: Peter Pettigrew had everything he could have wanted. A woman he loved, a job, and a place in the new revolution. Everything changed when the woman he loved followed her dreams for the man she loved.
Genre and eventual pairings: Romance/Drama. The pairings are OC/Peter, James/Lily, And Later OC/Sirius
Warnings: Rated PG-13 for OC's potty mouth
Notes on any aspects you're interested in receiving feedback about and/or anything else you feel is pertinent: I'd like to know if my characters are well devloped
Brief excerpt of the story:

Peter sighed, waiting nervously at King’s cross. His girlfriend of almost one year was coming back from Hogwarts for Christmas. She had accepted his offer to spend Christmas with him and he could imagine their Christmas already, just the two of them. At nineteen, he was sure that Iris was the woman he wanted to spend the rest of his life with. She was everything he ever wanted, beauty, intelligence, humor. She didn’t even mind his akwardness.

His thoughts were cut off by the train coming in. His hand tightened over the flowers he bought for her. The ring in his pocket burned. He watched the line of people filtering out. Peter watched as students ran to their parents and guardians.

Fandoms and genres you're willing to read for in return:
Anything really. I was going to do the person who posted before me.

Welcome! smile If it is character depth in HP your looking for then I am probably the best one here to talk to haha lots of experience there... but I can't read it right this second cause I am working on some stuff of my own so I'll take a look at it in a day or so k? biggrin but feel free to enjoy one of my stories in the mean time and/or get some more reviews from others!

I'd love to review ones of your storys, but wheres the link?

If your curious we have a link to the story archive in the original post. ^_^

[milila]

No one is on this weekend XD.

[Lady Sedia Auvryarn]

hehe I won't be on cause I actually have a job to go to now xd yay for me!

[PadawanCyn]

Oooh, I'm around... somewhat. What's up?

[Ritzy_freak]

Lady Sedia Auvryarn

hehe I won't be on cause I actually have a job to go to now xd yay for me!

me too!!

[White Rabbit Redux]

Sorry I haven't been around/ School starts tomorrow for me and I have a lot of work to catch up with.

[milila]

I've been working on a paper for English class, but I need an excuse to take a break. I work at library in my college, so I have a lot of free to mess around XD. Procrastination............I should get back to my English paper it's due Tuesday.

[PadawanCyn]

*looking for stuff to read*

Is there anyone who hasn't been served yet?

[milila]

PadawanCyn

*looking for stuff to read*

Is there anyone who hasn't been served yet?

I don't think so we get on that stuff pretty fast. Good news is we are reaching 100 posts. biggrin

[terradi]

PadawanCyn

*looking for stuff to read*

Is there anyone who hasn't been served yet?

I'd love to have a reader, but I fear my Salvatore stuff is a bit heavily wrapped up with Dungeons and Dragons and may be a tough read for anyone who hasn't followed it.

Still haven't reviewed any works. sweatdrop I need to get on that.

[PadawanCyn]

terradi

I'd love to have a reader, but I fear my Salvatore stuff is a bit heavily wrapped up with Dungeons and Dragons and may be a tough read for anyone who hasn't followed it.

Still haven't reviewed any works. sweatdrop I need to get on that.

Well, I'm not familiar with that fandom so I wouldn't be able to comment on characterization or canon-related plot, but I could still take a look if you like?

[terradi]

PadawanCyn

terradi

I'd love to have a reader, but I fear my Salvatore stuff is a bit heavily wrapped up with Dungeons and Dragons and may be a tough read for anyone who hasn't followed it.

Still haven't reviewed any works. sweatdrop I need to get on that.

Well, I'm not familiar with that fandom so I wouldn't be able to comment on characterization or canon-related plot, but I could still take a look if you like?

*grin* I'd love it. Let me post up the next chapter first. That one I've rewritten pretty heavily. The world may be unfamiliar, but well, anyone should be able to tell me if I've gone out of the realm of telling a story and gotten too technical. sweatdrop I spent a lot of hours looking for information on Forgotten Realms and trying to figure out how to put this together following cannon. I know what I have works technically, but I'm a bit afraid that it will be a boring read.

I should have that next one up within the week. Just as soon as I finish making all the major corrections due to plot adjustments that I need!