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[White Rabbit Redux]

Sold: Have a Half-Life x Twilight crossover... and have the 'vampires' horribly burned and maned, or any other kind of terrible torture you could think of, like playing nothing but Linkin Park for 72 hours straight.

[milila]

I just finished the first 1600 words in my contest entry, which is my first chapter. It's kind of short, but I had a hard time starting it ^_^'.

[acute encephalitis]

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@Lady Sedia: I can't just stick to one picture, now can I? X3
Oh dear. Please don't tell me that Light discovered magic. If he did, it's the end of the world. T^T

I used to write Pokemon and Naruto crossovers all the time. But I never used to do it like others would. I wouldn't make the Pokemon characters become ninjas, or the Naruto characters turn into Pokemon or become trainers. All I would do is borrow a few characters, dump them in some random AU place, and write. D:

[PadawanCyn]

It's great to know you think so, Kaida! biggrin It's going to be hard to write, though... I was only outlining chapters and already I was trying to turn the bad guys into good, haha.

Go Sedia!! Go mils!! Write write write!

[Lady Sedia Auvryarn]

@Kaida: nah nothing like that hehe its a "sort of" crossover because my OC in the HP universe likes...*cough*isobsessedwith*cough*...the show, so its not really a crossover character wise but it does talk about the show and use "merchandise" from it lol

@Cyn: *scolds her* don't you darn! lol your baddies must stay baddies twisted and the rest of your post made me laugh so hard hahahaha whee

[Vengful_Soldier]

White Rabbit Redux

Sold: Have a Half-Life x Twilight crossover... and have the 'vampires' horribly burned and maned, or any other kind of terrible torture you could think of, like playing nothing but Linkin Park for 72 hours straight.

No no no, have them get mauled by headcrab zombies and then shot by Father Grigori!

[acute encephalitis]

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@Pads: Like Sedia said, baddies must stay baddies. X3

@Lady Sedia: *sighs* Okay, I'm just glad that Light didn't discover magic. ^^;;

[Lady Sedia Auvryarn]

hehe I haven't even watched Death Note yet, and don't care to really, but the idea came into my head and went on paper fast lol so I had to do it whee

[acute encephalitis]

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XD Nice.

[PadawanCyn]

*stands at attention!*
Yes, ma'am! Hehe, I was pretty fast at squashing those goody urges, though. Nothing like throwing in a random one-eyed dude with an orange mask to fix a story. 3nodding

Oh, for a moment there I thought that crossover might have something to do with Tom's diary, lol.

[acute encephalitis]

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One-eyed dude with an orange mask...?

DX STOP TORTURING ME! I WANNA READ THESE STORIES SO BAD! T^T

Which reminds me, can someone tell me if this even makes sense? D:

Quote:

During the day, the streets of Konoha were usually crowded with people, from early in the morning to late at night. But when everyone was gone, the village seemed to have a different feel to it. You couldn't call it 'comforting' really, nor 'upsetting'. Perhaps peaceful, but with a hint of danger in the air.

I hate writing beginning paragraphs. I always get stuck on them. ><;;

[PadawanCyn]

Lol, au contraire, mon amie! I have to torture you, otherwise you'll go back to writing CommanderShipping and I'll be left with no one intelligent enough to talk Naruto with... XD

That paragraph makes sense, but I find it a bit ambiguous. Don't know if that's from my academic English or not, though. Maybe if instead of "from early in the morning to late at night" you wrote "from sun up to sun down" and took out that "during the day" it would be clearer...? 3nodding

[acute encephalitis]

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Bawww, but I wanna write more CommanderShipping! D:

That would do it. Or I could write the whole paragraph over again... DX

[Vengful_Soldier]

Just write down the first thing that comes to mind and BAM make it work :3

[acute encephalitis]

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Now if I can remember the first thing that came to my mind.