Hey everyone, the other day I recently posted a new fanfic I started writing up at fanfiction.net its a Teen Titans fic. I havent written fan fiction in over a year, before that I had written two others they were both Final Fantasy X fic (I wrote them both way before X-2 came out) but I really wanted to ask you guys here to read my stories... especially my new Titans one, I am trying really hard to improve my writing skills, so I need people to review and let me know what I need to fix (not just these 'good job' or 'ohhhwhatsnext' reviews) and I thought you guys were most likely to do that than what I have seen at fanfiction.net. so if any of you have the time, here's the link to the story:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2116468/1/
let me know what you think of it! and if you do like my writing (I hope so) you can click on my author name at the top left (Yuna-0
cool and it will take you to the two other's I've written. thanks to anyone who takes the time to do this! I would be more than happy to help review anyone else's works they have up at that site (or this one too of course!) that wants me to.
heart (and dont be a jerk and say 'this totally sucks' if you think it totally sucks give me a reason why it does dont just throw it at me, same as if you think its good tell me why not just 'hm its good')
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