dark vamp angle101
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- Posted: Sat, 20 Sep 2014 17:02:45 +0000
HiGuys I Know It been a long time since I posted hear but now I much improve my writting and even got betta readers -sra,kyleaghand esther.
YOUCAn see all my storeys here af fan faction dot net
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2955048/darkvampangle101
color=violet]SO READ AND REVIOW MY NEW FROZEN FANFICTON
Princess Ilsa looked around Arundel and enjoyed the pink flwoers and green trees. The low class people who were her subjects ran around her playing music and laugning. Truely, every one was happy in Arundele.
Except for the Queen. She had been coronation a year ago. She was 19 year old. She was beatiful, with a lovely sister, and with a kingdom who now loved her (despite thinking breafly she was a monster because she could make ice castles and stuff).
So why was she so unhappy? Elsa could not say.
The sound of a trompet made her jump. She looked down at her glove hands - just a percaution, now that she could coltrol her snow ice powers.
It was a big day.
Princess Ana was geting married.
The pastor performed the marriage. THe Queen being the ruler of the land sat in the front row of the big curch. It was the same one she had been made Queen in. She shover at thinking of the last time she was here! How she had nearly frozen her royal golden ball, and her royal staff! How she had been so scarred at reveal herself! It had been truely terrefying!
But now, she was suppose to be happy. Her sister stand in front of the church in a enourmous white empire wasted gown, with rinestones and pearls all over the pouffy skirt, and with a tight lace top that had pink bows down the boneing. SHe also had her red hair up and woven with pink flowers and a gigantic Sworvski cristal tiara. Her feet were in satin chinese laundries gladiators.
Why did Elsa not feel appy? She JUST DID NOT KNOW.
"Do you, Princess Anna Sara Esther Kyleagh of Arendell take Olaf the Ice trollman to be your lawful wedding husand? said the minister.
Ana hicuped with a sob. "I DO!"
"And do you Kristof taje the Princess to be your lawfully wedded husband?"
I DO" poor KRistof looked like he might faint at any second - after all he was kind of an efeminate man, despite hes talent at sledding and ice choping.
"Then by the powers investing by me by the Queen of Arendelle and by GOD I pornounce you MAN and WIFE. You may kiss the bride!"
Then Seven and Anna kissed and everyone clapped and the band played some beautiful music and there were some firework in the church. Anna and Kristoph (who was dressed in a beutiful purple and black outfit with a medal of the arendel flower on his chest) ran out of the church giggeling, hands held, and jumped into a boat. Ilsa waved at them and forced a smile as their sailboat sailed off into the sunset. Anna's voice echo back at Ilsa as Anna and Kristoph sailed aay...
"Enjoy yourself while I am gone sister, my husband Christof and I will enjoy our honey moon visiting Princess Rapunzel and Prince Ugene!"
Anna did not cry. She was a QUEEN. She did not cry. But inside, she felt like crying. And she did not fale to notice that the edge of the fiord started to freeze, just a little bit, as her favorite and only sister sailed away with her new husban.
Queen Elsa walked around her empty castle. It was such a quite place without Anna. Anna was noisy and did stuff like rideing bikes round the halls and running and jumping off windows and the cleaners swings and stuff. But now there was just a couple of servant who cleaned the crapets and dishes. But they left Elsa alone. Else spent most of her day feeling bored and doing a few queenly things like sitting for picture on the back of coin and stamp.
Anna had lot of sutors. Hans had want to marry her (even if it was kind of fake). Then Kristoph want to marry her. And that was even before ANna even come of age!
Yet Else had never been attention of any princes or even just poor guys. Maybe I will forever be alone... maybe i will be marryed to my country... never knowing the joy of mother hood or find my 1 true LOVE.
Elsa was jelous of her sister. After all ANna had done what every girl truely wanted from life. Probably when she come back from the land of Princess Rapunzle and Ugene, she might even be pregnant. And Elsa was starting to suspectthat maybe Annas child would be the one to inheriting the throne of Arendel.
Esla knew it and it maked her feel really bad to be jelous.
Then suddenly there was a big noise. It was a thud noise. Even though ELsa was in her bed room she could even here it from inside there with the door close.
"Gerda? Okum? What is that big noise?" she shoulted. "I demand to know as the queen of this land!"
The fat one came into her room. "My lady it is a group of men who say that they are from the Southern Ailes."
"The Southern Ailes?" Elsa sat up and she felt the coldness of ice in her finers. "Like that evil man Hans came from? Give me a moment to dress."
"Of couse my LAdy, I will help get you into your kirtel and crown."
She got out her least fancy dress which only had a few perls on it and was made out of green domask and had a mandrine colllar and lace sleeves.
After she made herself looked good, she stormed down the stairs and opened the door.
Standing out in front of her castle front door was... HANS!
Else gasped and pased out!
YOUCAn see all my storeys here af fan faction dot net
https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2955048/darkvampangle101
color=violet]SO READ AND REVIOW MY NEW FROZEN FANFICTON
Princess Ilsa looked around Arundel and enjoyed the pink flwoers and green trees. The low class people who were her subjects ran around her playing music and laugning. Truely, every one was happy in Arundele.
Except for the Queen. She had been coronation a year ago. She was 19 year old. She was beatiful, with a lovely sister, and with a kingdom who now loved her (despite thinking breafly she was a monster because she could make ice castles and stuff).
So why was she so unhappy? Elsa could not say.
The sound of a trompet made her jump. She looked down at her glove hands - just a percaution, now that she could coltrol her snow ice powers.
It was a big day.
Princess Ana was geting married.
The pastor performed the marriage. THe Queen being the ruler of the land sat in the front row of the big curch. It was the same one she had been made Queen in. She shover at thinking of the last time she was here! How she had nearly frozen her royal golden ball, and her royal staff! How she had been so scarred at reveal herself! It had been truely terrefying!
But now, she was suppose to be happy. Her sister stand in front of the church in a enourmous white empire wasted gown, with rinestones and pearls all over the pouffy skirt, and with a tight lace top that had pink bows down the boneing. SHe also had her red hair up and woven with pink flowers and a gigantic Sworvski cristal tiara. Her feet were in satin chinese laundries gladiators.
Why did Elsa not feel appy? She JUST DID NOT KNOW.
"Do you, Princess Anna Sara Esther Kyleagh of Arendell take Olaf the Ice trollman to be your lawful wedding husand? said the minister.
Ana hicuped with a sob. "I DO!"
"And do you Kristof taje the Princess to be your lawfully wedded husband?"
I DO" poor KRistof looked like he might faint at any second - after all he was kind of an efeminate man, despite hes talent at sledding and ice choping.
"Then by the powers investing by me by the Queen of Arendelle and by GOD I pornounce you MAN and WIFE. You may kiss the bride!"
Then Seven and Anna kissed and everyone clapped and the band played some beautiful music and there were some firework in the church. Anna and Kristoph (who was dressed in a beutiful purple and black outfit with a medal of the arendel flower on his chest) ran out of the church giggeling, hands held, and jumped into a boat. Ilsa waved at them and forced a smile as their sailboat sailed off into the sunset. Anna's voice echo back at Ilsa as Anna and Kristoph sailed aay...
"Enjoy yourself while I am gone sister, my husband Christof and I will enjoy our honey moon visiting Princess Rapunzel and Prince Ugene!"
Anna did not cry. She was a QUEEN. She did not cry. But inside, she felt like crying. And she did not fale to notice that the edge of the fiord started to freeze, just a little bit, as her favorite and only sister sailed away with her new husban.
Queen Elsa walked around her empty castle. It was such a quite place without Anna. Anna was noisy and did stuff like rideing bikes round the halls and running and jumping off windows and the cleaners swings and stuff. But now there was just a couple of servant who cleaned the crapets and dishes. But they left Elsa alone. Else spent most of her day feeling bored and doing a few queenly things like sitting for picture on the back of coin and stamp.
Anna had lot of sutors. Hans had want to marry her (even if it was kind of fake). Then Kristoph want to marry her. And that was even before ANna even come of age!
Yet Else had never been attention of any princes or even just poor guys. Maybe I will forever be alone... maybe i will be marryed to my country... never knowing the joy of mother hood or find my 1 true LOVE.
Elsa was jelous of her sister. After all ANna had done what every girl truely wanted from life. Probably when she come back from the land of Princess Rapunzle and Ugene, she might even be pregnant. And Elsa was starting to suspectthat maybe Annas child would be the one to inheriting the throne of Arendel.
Esla knew it and it maked her feel really bad to be jelous.
Then suddenly there was a big noise. It was a thud noise. Even though ELsa was in her bed room she could even here it from inside there with the door close.
"Gerda? Okum? What is that big noise?" she shoulted. "I demand to know as the queen of this land!"
The fat one came into her room. "My lady it is a group of men who say that they are from the Southern Ailes."
"The Southern Ailes?" Elsa sat up and she felt the coldness of ice in her finers. "Like that evil man Hans came from? Give me a moment to dress."
"Of couse my LAdy, I will help get you into your kirtel and crown."
She got out her least fancy dress which only had a few perls on it and was made out of green domask and had a mandrine colllar and lace sleeves.
After she made herself looked good, she stormed down the stairs and opened the door.
Standing out in front of her castle front door was... HANS!
Else gasped and pased out!
