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THIS IS MY STORY KINDA BASED ANIME LIKE BUT I MADE IT UP AND ITS CALLED THE DREAMER THERE IS MANY MANY SPELLING ERRORS AND WILL BE FIXED LATER ON, SO PLEASE TELLME WHAT YOU THINK!




THE DREAMER

"I see smoke, whats going on?",i yelled.
"I don't know ,let's go check it out, Ella said.
I STARTED TO RUN AS FAST AS MY LEGS WOULD TAKE ME. SOMETHING WAS WRONG WHY WAS THERE SMOKE IN MY VILLAGE? I STARTED TO HEAR SCREAMS, MY MIND WAS RACING AND THAN I SAW IT.I STOPPED IN MY TRACKS. EVERYONE WAS DEAD.THERE WAS SO MUCH BLOOD AND EVERYWHERE!AAAAAAAHHHHHH I SCREAMED.
I WOKE UP.IT WAS THE DREAM I HAVE BEEN HAVING FOR MANY DAYS NOW.IT FELT SO REAL, THE HEAT OF THE FLAMES,THE SCREAMS OF PEOPLE.I NEVER WANT TO HAVE THAT DREAM AGAIN I THOUGHT.
"It's time for breakfast get down here."My mother called.
I HURRIED AND GOT OUT OF MY PAJAMAS AND BRUSHED MY HAIR AND TEETH AND RAISED DOWN STAIRS.I KEPT THINKING SHOULD I TELL MY FAMILY ABOUT THIS DREAM THAT I KEEP HAVING? OH WELL I THOUGHT THAT PIECE OF BACON RIGHT THERE LOOKS YUMMY.
I GRABBED IT, MAN IT WAS GOOD.THERE WAS A KNOCK ON OUR DOOR. MY YOUNGER BROTHER TYLER OPENEND THE DOOR.
"Oh its just Ella", he sighed.
"What do u mean just Ella,"she said trying to sound annoying.
ELLA IS MY FRIEND SINCE ELEMENTARY SCHOOL. SHE PRACTICALLY LIVES AT MY HOUSE. I QUICKLY GOBBLED DOWN A GLASS OF ORANGE JUICE, SLIPPED MY SHOES AND COAT ON AND SLIPPED OUT THE DOOR WITH ELLA ONLY A FEW STEPPS BEHIND.
I THOUGHT MAYBE I SHOULD TELL HER ABOUT MY DREAM. AFTER ALL SHE IS MY BEST FRIEND MAYBE SHE CAN HELP ME UNDERSTAND WHY I AM HAVING THIS DREAM AGAIN AND AGAIN.
Ella just looked at me.
"Whats bothering you," she said?
OF COURSE, SHE HAS BEEN MY BEST FRIEND FOREVER SHE ALWAYS KNOWS WHEN SOMETHINGS WRONG WITH ME, SOMETIMES ITS NOT ALWAYS A GOOD THING.
I sighed and took a deep breath.
"Well...", I didn't really know how to explain it all, because i didn't really understand much of it myself.
She just stared at me with that confuzed look of hers.
"I have been having these dreams lately".
"I don't really understand them myself but they are scary"!
She said, "What are they about"?
"They are the same thing everynight you and I go off looking for berries and than we see smoke, I always run towards the smoke and see that our whole village has been anialated!"
"Some dream", she said.
"Do u think it means anything," i replied?
"I don't think so, but if its bothering you, i think that you should talk it over with kenai,".
OH YEAH WHY DIDN'T I THINK OF THAT! GOSH, SOMETIMES IM SO STUPID. WE WALKED TO SCHOOL IN SILENCE,WHEN WE ARRIVED AT SCHOOL WE WAVED GOODBYE AND WALKED TO OUR LOCKERS.(OH YEAH I THOUGHT I SHOULD MENTION I DON'T GO TO A NORMAL SCHOOL, ITS A SCHOOL TO TRAIN YOU TO DEFEND OUR VILLAGE). I MEAN WE DO LEARN MATH, PHYSICS,AND ALL THE REGULAR STUFF BUT WE HAVE OTHER CLASSES LIKE HOW TO DEFUSE A BOMB IN 15 SECONDS. THAT CLASS IS DEFFINANTLY NOT MY FAVORITE,NO PRESSURE OR ANYTHING!THE BELL RANG, OH DANG YEAH I ALMOST FORGOT I HAVE KENDO CLASS. I RACED DOWN THE HALL.
"Hault Angelique".
OH SNAP I THOUGHT THE HALL MONITAR(GAURDIANS) HAD TO CATCH ME. ALL THE STUDENTS CALL THEM HALL MONITORS BEHIND THERE BACK.THEY ARE ACTUALLY GAURDAINS THAT KEEP THE SCHOOL IN TACT AND MAKE SURE ALL THE ROOLS ARE FOLLOWED.
"And where do oyu think think that your going Miss Angelique"?
"Come on ,i replied, can't you just give me a brake just this one time Xander?"j
"Alright just this once Angelique just watch were your going and get to class."
"Thanks", i yelled back to him.
AWE MAN, NOW THAT GUY HAD TO GO AND MAKE ME LATE FOR KENDO CLASS AND THAT TEACHER IS NOT SO MUCH ON THE FORGIVING SIDE.I OPENED THE DOOR QUIETLY GOT IN MY SEAT. YES I MADE IT SHE IS STILL TAKING ROLL.I RELAXED IT MY SEAT.SHE STARTED TO CALL NAMES.
"Lola", "Here".
"Kenai",*silence*.
"Mr. Kenai Reed", she snapped!
KENAI WALKED IN THE ROOM.I CHUCKLED IT LOOKED LIKE SOME PEOPLE NEVER CHANGE AFTER SO MANY YEARS, LATE AS USUAL.
"I'm here Mrs. Gregory."
Mrs Gegory replied, "I will need to see you after class Mr. Reed".
DANG I SAID I NEED TO TALK TO HIM ABOUT MY DREAM! KENAI IS ANOTHER ONE OF MY FRIENDS, KENAI, ROY,ELLA,AND I(ANGELIQUE) HAVE BEEN FRIENDS FOR EVER.KENAI IS THE DELIQUENT OF THE GROUP ALAWYS MAKIN TROUBLE AND ISN'T VERY BRIGHT, BUT HE IS A GOOD PERSON AT HEART,IT SEEMS NOT MANY PEOPLE ACTUALLY SEE THAT EXCEPT US.HES MEDIUM HIGHT, HAS SHAGGY BROWN HAIR,BROWN EYES,AND ALWAYS WEARS BAGGY CLOTHING.(THINKS HES COOL,HA). ROY IS KENAI'S COMPLET OPPASITE, THEY ARE ALWAYS AT EACHOTHER. ROY IS SMART,GETS GOOD GRADES,SOMETIMES TO MUCH OF A NERD,AND IS EVEN ON THE STUDENT COUNCIL.HE HAS RED SHAGGY HAIR, REALLY TALL,AND BROWN EYES. ELLA IS MY BEST FRIEND, SHE IS SHY MOST OF THE TIME AROUND PEOPLE SHE DOESN'T KNOW.SHE IS A VERY KIND PERSON AND ALWAYS THINKS SHE GIVES GOOD ADVICE BUT SHE REALLY DOESN'T.SHE IS TALL WITH BLONDE SHORT HAIR AND BLUE EYES.SHE IS VERY SMART AND ALSO GETS GOOD GRADES,AND LIKE ROY IS ON THE STUDENT COUNCIL, SHE ALSO PLAYS THE CLARINET. THEN THERE IS ME IM SHORT AND HAVE LONG JET BLACK HAIR(WHICH SOME PEOPLE THINK I DIED IT) I AM NOT THE SMARTEST OF THE BUNCH BUT HEY, IM PASSING. IM NOT LIKE ELLA, I'M NOT GOODY TO-SHOES.I GET IN TROUBLE LIKE KENAI ALMOST EVERDAY OF MY LIFE,AND I ALWAYS RUN LATE.I LIKE PLAYING SPORTS.AND HERE WE ALL ARE IN STUPID KENDO CLASS WITH MRS. GREGORY I SWARE ITS LIKE JUNIOR HIGH ALL OVER AGAIN, AND OH YEAH I HAVNT TOLD YOU YET WERE FIRST YEARS IN HIGH SCHOOL.
"Miss Rose".
I LOOKED UP, AND THERE MRS. GREGORY WAS STANDING.
"Would you care to pay attention",she snapped?
"I'm sorry Mrs. Gregory I'll pay attention."
"Good",she replied,"than would you care to explain the 8 ways to hold a kendo stick"?
OH SNAPP I THOUGHT I ONLY KNOW 6 WAYS TO HOLD A KENDO STICK, OF COURSE SHE HAS TO ASK THE ONE QUESTION I DON'T KNOW THE ANSWER TWO!I QUICKLY EXPLAINED THE 6/8 WAYS TO HOLD THE KENDO STICK.
"What are the other two ways Miss Rose"?
"I don't know", i mumbled.
"What was that," she said into my ear.
"I yelled i don't know."
BY KNOW PRETTY MUCH THE WHOLE CLASS WAS LOOKING AT ME.I FELT EMBARRASSED I REALLY DON'T LIKE THAT TEACHER.
SHE JUST GAVE ME THE EVIL EYE(BELIEVE IT OR NOT,WELL I DO BELIEVE IT BUT I GET THAT EVIL ALOT).
"Miss Rose, i would also like to see you after class,"she replied almost sounding as if she got pleasure out of that.Which she probably did.
SHE JUST KEPT GOING ON AND ON ABOUT HER OLD KENDO STORIES,I GUESS TODAY I WON'T GET A CHANCE TO WACK HER WITH A KENDO STICK(KEPT LAUGHING TO MYSELF); THE BELL FINALLY RANG AND I WAS READY TO LEAVE JUST I REMEMBERED FUDGE I HAVE TO STAY AFTER CLASS WITH MRS. EVIL. SOMETIMES I SWARE THAT TEACHER IS OUT TO MAKE MY LIFE HORRIBLE. WELL IT WOULDN'T BE SO BAD SINCE MY FRIEND KENAI IS STAYING AFTER TWO(AS ALWAYS,NO SURPRISER).
"Mrs Evil, said," i would like you to wash my chalkboards and clean all of the desks than you may go to second period".
"Yes mam," we both replied at the same time.
I REALLY HATE HER NOW I HAVE TO WASH HER BOARDS AND HER DESKS ALL BECAUSE SHE JUST TO LAZY TO DO IT HERSELF, BUT BETTER YET SHE IS MAKING ME MISS GYM [MY FAVORITE CLASS]. IN GYM WE WERE ALL GONNA PLAY DODGEBALL. AND ITS THE BEST GAME EVER SOMETIMES WE GET A LITTLE CARRIED AWAY. IN OUR SCHOOL DODGEBALL ISN'T LIKE NORMAL DODGEBALL WE WELL USE MEDICINE BALLS,AND BOY DO THOSE HURT IF YOU GET IT. OH YEAH I ALMOST FORGOT WHERE I WAS I HAVE TO CLEAN THOSE STUPID BOARDS.
" Earth to Angelique", Kenai said.
"What",? i replied.
"Don't just space out like an astronaut, clean the boards", he said.
"Oh yeah",i said.
SOMETIMES HE THINKS HE'S SO FUNNY, HIM AND HIS WISE CRACK JOKES.FINALLY I'M ALMOST DONE WITH THE BOARDS AND OH WAIT I ALMOST FORGOT ISN'T THIS THE PERFECT OPPERTUNITY TO TELL HIM ABOUT MY DREAM?
"Hey,um,keani?",i said.
"What is it"?, he answerd.
I replied," I have been having these really wierd dreams lately and i wanted to know what you think about them?"
HIS FACE SUDDENLY LOOKED INTERSTED,LIKE I PUT HIM INFRONT OF A TV WITH BASEBALL PLAYING.
"It was a scary dream," i explained the whole dream to him as i did to Ella.
"Maybe the dream is trying to tell you something,Angel,"he said.
"I think that maybe you try to figure what the dream means and why your having it,"Kenai said.
I KNEW IT HE DID REALLY HAVE WAY BETTER ADVICE THAN ELLA DID.HES' GOT A POINT THOUGH, USUALLY DREAMS HAPPEN FOR A REASON.THE KEY POINT IS USUALLY.AM I JUST OVER WORRYING ABOUT SOMETHING THAT ISN'T EVEN IMPORTANT, OR IS IT SOMETHING ELSE AND IT IT HAS A POING. WEATHER IT DOES HAVE A POING OR IT DOESN'T I AM GOING TO GET TO THE BOTTOM OF THIS.FINALLY THE BOREDS WERE DONE AND I COULD FINALLY GO TO GYM CLASS. I QUICKLY GATHERED UP THINGS.
"Later, cya in 4th period," i shouted to Kenai.
"Cya", he shouted back.
I RACED DOWN THE HALL TOWARDS GYM CLASS BUT THAN AS SOON AS I TURNED THE COURNER I STOPPED, BECAUSE THERE WAS MR HALL MONITOR(SNICKER). I STARTED TO WALK TOWARDS GYM AND THAN BOOKED DOWN THE STAIRS AND OUTSIDE TO GYM.GOOD THEY HAVN'T STARTED THE GAME YET, I QUICKLY TOLD THE TEACHER(MR. ANDERSAN) WHAT HAPPEND WITH MRS. EVIL, AND HE FORGIVED MY TARDYNESS AND TOLD ME TO GO ON THE GREEN TEAM.I PUT MY HAIR IN A QUICK PONY AND RAN OVER TO ROY, WHO WAS ON MY TEAM.
He said,"Your late".
"Yeah i had to stay after because of Mrs. Evil", I said angrily.
"Well don't dilly dattle because the games just about to start," he said half laughing.
"Right", i replied eagerly.
THE WHISLTE BLEW AND I STAYED BACK WAITING FOR A BALL TO COME TO ME, REMEMBER HOW SAID OUR DODGEBALL ISN'T LIKE NORMAL SCHOOLS DODGEBALL, WE USE MEDCINE BALLS TO HELP TRAIN OUR BODIES TO BE ABLE TO LIFT HEAVY OBJECTS. IT WASN'T ORIGINALLY SUPPOSED TO BE MEDICINE BALLS IT WAS SUPPOSE TO BE BRICKS, BUT THE PARENTS WOULDN'T LET THEM DO THAT SO THEY SETTLED FOR MEDICINE BALLS. SOMETIMES I WONDER IF BRICKS WOULD OF BEEN A BETTER CHOICE. FINALLY A BALL WAS THROUGH AT ME AND I COUGHT IT, THAT KID WAS OUT, I THAN THROUGH IT AT SOME GIRL(THAT I DIDN'T KNOW THE NAME OUF, RIGHT I KNOW DIDN'T KNOW THE NAME OF THEIR OWN CLASSMATE,PITIFUL RIGHT?) I HIT HER IN THE STOMACHE,OUCH, THAT HAD TO LEAVE A MARK.FINALLY DODGEBALL WAS OVER AND MY TEAM ONE. LAUGHS PITIFUL TO SELF, WE ALWAYS WIN.
"Class dismissed", Mr. Andersan shouted.
I looked back at Roy and said, "Save me a seat at lunch"!
He answered, "As always, you just don't be late".
KNOW I HURRIED UP AND GOT BACK INTO MY UNIFORM AND HEAD OFF TWO SOCIAL STUDIES, NOT THE WORSE BUT DEFFINANTLY COULD BE BETTER. WE ARE LEARNING ABOUT THE GREAT PEOPLE THAT DEFENDED OUT VILLAGE AND WHAT THEY WENT THROUGHT TO DEFEND IT. I RAN INTO THE CLASS ROOM AND QUICKY SAT DOWN. THIS MIGHT EVER BE THE FIRST TIME I WAS ON TIME. ELLA ARRIVED RIGHT AFTER AND SAT NEXT TO ME.
She smiled and said,"Wow, seems like the first time you were ever on time."
"Yeah",i replied,"That is just wat i was thinking"!
MISS GREENWOOD ENTERED THE ROOM. SHE WAS A NICE TEACHER, I FELT BAD FOR HER THOUGHT BECAUSE SHE NEEDED TO LOOSE SOME WEIGHT. MANY STUDENTS MADE FUN OF HER BEHIND HER BACK, I ACTUALLY LIKED THIS MISS G.
"Open your books to page 200 please", she commanded.
THAT CLASS WENT BYE REALLY FAST AND TODAY JUST MIGHT BE MY LUCKY DAY BECAUSE THERE IS NO HOMEWORK!(AWESOME FIRST TIME LIKE EVER)! ELLA AND I WALKED TOWARDS CSI AND YES I DID SAY CSI, THIS CLASS HELPS US UNCOVER CLUES AND HOW TO TRACK SOMEONE DOWN, IF YOU ARE TRYING TO ASSASINATE SOMEONE.THIS IS THE ONLY CLASS THAT ALL 4 OF US ARE IN TOGETHER.
Ella and i waved to Roy and Kenai,the teacher screamed at us,"Sit down"!
THIS IS TEACHER PROFESSER NEEWAY, AKA MR EVIL NUMBER 2. ELLA AND I QUICKLY RUSHED TO OUR SEATS NEXT TO ROY AND KENAI AND SAT DOWN. I ACTUALLY PAY ATTENTION IN THIS CLASS. HE WAS TALKING ABOUT HOW YOU SHOULD ALWAYS CONCEAL YOUSELF FROM THE ENEMY.BLAH BLAH BLAH THE USUAL.
"You must never let the enemy know or think you are there," he explained.
He scoped the room"I would like 4 volunteers to go through a real life stimulation", he said,"They will proform how they think it should be done, while the rest of the studens will be watching and evaluating."
I THOUGHT I AM SO NOT VOLUNTEERING FOR THIS.IT SOUNDS STUPID I LOOKED OVER AT ELLA SHE LOOKED INTERESTED AND SO DID RYO.KENAI AND I JUST LOOKED AT EACHOTHER AND SIGHED.THERE WAS NO WAY THEY COULD MAKE ME DO THIS.
"Angelique, Kenai, Kyo,and Ella, you four will be the one that go through the stimulation,"he said,sounding evil.
I LOOKED OVER AT MY FRIENDS AND MAYBE I HEARD IT WRONG, AND HE DID JUST NOT SAY OUR NAMES! IM PRAYING HE DID OT JUST SAY OUR NAMES!
Ella smiled and said,"Did you hear that Angel, we get to be the ones that get to do that".
I answered sarcasticaly, "O joy"!
Roy said, " I think this will be an interesting experiance."
ELLA NODDED HER HEAD IN AGREEMENT.
Kenai and me looked at eachother and said " You have got to be kidding me".
I LOOKED AT MR. EVIL 2, AND THIS DID NOT LOOK A GAME TO HIM. OH BOY, THIS CAN ONLY MEAN ONE THING. THEY'VE GOT SOMETHING BIG IN STORE FOR US! MR. EVIL 2 STARTED TO EXPLAIN HOW THE STIMULATION WAS GOING TO WORK, WE WERE GOING TO GO INTO THE WOODS AND TRY TO FOLLOW A TEACHER WITHOUT GETTING CAUGHT.*TRICKY* I THOUGHT, THEY PICKED A GOOD ONE FOR A STIMULATION. THEY TOLD US THEY ARE TAKING US FOR OUT OF 7 AND 8 PERIODS TO DO THE SIMULATION AND PREPARE UNTIL THAN SO CLASS WAS DISSMISSED EARLY FOR US ANYWAY. ALL FOUR OF US STARTED TO WALK AND KENAI AND I WENT TO THE LEFT AND ELLA AND ROY WENT TO THE RIGHT.I HAD PHYSICS. ONE OF THE HARDEST CLASSES TO PASS BUT THE TEACHER IS AWESOME.
"Angelique", Kenai said.
OH BOY I THOUGHT HE USUALLY ONLY CALLED ME BY MY FIRST NAME IF ONE,HE WAS MAD AT ME OR I WAS IN TROUBLE:2 HE WAS JOKING AROUND;OR 3 HE HAD SOMETHING VERY IMPORTANT TO SAY.I WATCHED HIM INTENTLY!
"Wat is it,"? I asked nervously.
"This stimulation were going to be doing,I have a really bad feeling about it," he answered.
OH NO WHEN KENAI GOT FEELINGS THEY WERE 99.99999 PERCENT ACCURATE. WHICH IS NOT A GOOD THING FOR THIS TYPE OF MATTER. BECAUSE I DON'T THINK WE CAN LIE OUR WAY OUT OF THIS ONE.
"Kenai,I said, when u get these feelings in your stomache your never wrong,you better not be pulling my leg!"
PULLING MY LEG IS AN EXPRESSING MEANING YOU HAVE BETTING NOT BE JOKING OR PLAYING A PRANK.
He looked at me seriously and spoke, "You know im not".
"Okay,Kenai, what do u think we should do than?," I said.
HE LOOKED LIKE HE WAS IN VERY SERIOUS THOUGHT AND THAN I HAD A FEELING DEEP DOWN IN THE PIT OF MY STOMACHE,HE WAS RIGHT SOMETHING IS DEFFINANTLY NOT RIGHT HERE.I WASN'T SURE IF WE SHOULD TELL RYO AND ELLA OF THIS BECAUSE THEY WERE LOOKIN FOWARD TO THE STIMULATION, THEY MIGHT NOT BELIEVE US AND THINK WERE DOING IT TO GET OUTTA THE STIMULATION.
"Awe, fudge ,I said, do you think we should tell Ella and Ryo?"
"I don't know yet, maybe this time my feelings wrong",he answered.
I gave him the look and said, " Kenai, when have your gut feelings ever failed us"?
"Good point,he said, I don't think we should tell Ella and Roy just yet."
"Alright",I said.
WE THEN WALKED TO LUNCH IN SILENCE, HE HAD HIS THINKIN FACE ON*SCOUGH*, HE DOESN'T THINK TO MUCH BUT WHEN HE PUTS SOME EFFERT INTO THINKING A PLAN , IT USUALLY ISN'T HALF BAD. WE FINALLY ARRIVED AT LUNCH. I GRABBED A TRAY AND GOT IN LIKE. I WOUNDER WAT WERE EATING TODAY(OMG WAT IS THAT?) I THINK THATS A FISH? YOU KNOW WAT I THINK IM GOING TO JUST STICK WITH SALAD TODAY. I GOT A PEPSI AND SAT DOWN NEXT TO ELLA AND THE REST OF THE GANG. RYO WAS ACTUALLY EATING THAT FISH! I THINK I JUST SAW IT MOVIE.
"Are you hungry,Angel, you contine two look at my food",Roy said?
"Oh no, it just looked like it moved" ,I said.
THEY ALL BROKE OUT IN LAUGHTER AND THAN KENAI CAME AND SAT DOWN NEXT TWO RYO. I LOOKED AT HIM SUSPICIOUSLY. I WAS WONDERING IF THIS IS A GOOD TIME TO TELL ELLA AND RYO WHAT KENAI AND I ARE THINKING.
" I think the simulation is not a good idea", keanai said.
WELL I GUESS I THOUGHT TWO SOON, HERE WE GO AS USUALLY ROy AND ELLA ARE GOING TO START A HUGE ARGUMENT(PLEASE NO FIST FIGHTS, IM NOT IN THE MOOD)!
"What do you mean you don't think it's a good idea", Ella said in her innocent little way.
I STEPPED IN.
" Kenai, had his gut feeling about it," I said.
RYO AND ELLA LOOKED AT US, THEY GAVE US THE LOOK LIKE SAID WHY DIDN'T YOU SAY SO EARLIER?
Roy said,"You guys should of said something ealier"!
"You guys are both idiots,"Ella replied, and Roy nodded his head in agreement.
"What do you mean we are idiots,?" Kenai and I retorted.
"Seriously you guys are both stubbern , we would of believed you and tried to figure a way out of this, now its a little to late for that", Ella practically yelled!
I looked at all of them and than asked the million dollar question,"What should we do"?
"I guess all we can do know is go through with the simulation", Roy sighed.
NOW MY STOMACHE IS STARTING TO FEEL QUEESY, I HAVE A REALLY BAD AND I MEAN REALLY BAD FEELING ABOUT THIS.WORSE YET IS ITS ONLY ONE PERIOD AWAY! MY FRIENDS AND I DIDN'T EAT TO MUCH THE REST OF OUR LUNCH. THANK GOODNES ROY DIDN'T, I STILL SWARE HIS MOVIED!*QUEASY*. THE BELL RANG AND WE ALL STARTED TO WALK TOWARDS THE OUTSIDE DOORS TO MEET MR.EVIL 2.
"Here we go," I said nervously.
I WALKED OUTSIDE AND NO ONE WAS OUT THERE EXCEPT MR. EVIL 2. OH MAN! I WALKED TOWARDS HIM TRYING TO SHOW ANY EXPRESSION OF UNEASINESS ON MY FACE.
"Hurry up, we don't have all day," Mr. Evil 2 yelled across the field.
"Gosh, were comming," Keani said but I don't think Mr. Evil heard him.
I WAS STARING AT MR. EVIL 2 AND HIS STUPID QUIRKY EVIL GRIN. HE WAS HOLDING A GPS AND TWO ROPES. OH COME ON SERIOUSLY THIS IS IT? NO GUNS? I COULD EVEN SETTLE FOR A SIMPLE KENDO STICK. WELL I GUESS THEY DID TEACH HOW TO USE A ROPE 100 DIFFERENT WAYS. SO ROPES CAN COME IN HANDY, TRUST ME THERE! HE HANDED ME A ROPE AND GAVE THE OTHER ROPE TO ELLA, KENAI AND ROY FOUGHT OVER THE GPS. ROY WON IT OVER AS USUALLY AND KENAI WAS IN HIS LITTLE HISSY FIT. COME ON GROW UP SERISOUSLY KENAI! OH WELL THATS NOT IMPORTANT NOW.
" You will have exactly one hour to find the teacher in the woods," Mr. Evil 2 said in the most evil way possible.
WHERES A KENDO STICK WHEN YOU NEED ONE?WE ALL LOOKED AT EACHOTHER AND BACK AT MR EVIL 2. HE STARTED HIS STOP WATCH AND A BUNCH OF CAMERAS WERE HOOKED UP TO US SO THE STUDENTS COULD WATCH US FROM THE CLASS ROOM, OH GREAT, SO IF I MESS UP AND LOOK LIKE A FOOL ONLY ABOUT 40 KIDS WILL BE WATCHING. NO PRESSURE! WHAT AM I KIDDING MYSELF PRESSURE AND LOTS OF IT! WE ALL STARTED TO WALK INTO THE FOREST. SCHOOL UNIFORMS DEFFINANTLY DON'T BLEND IN WITH THE FOREST. ALL GREEN AND THAN OURS ARE WHITE AND BLACK.
" So?, what's our plan, anyone," Ella asked.
Of course Roy was the first to answer," I think we should split into teams it might go faster."
" Im okay with that," I answered.
Kenai nodded and than said,"Sounds like a plan to
ELLA AND I WENT TO THE LEFT AND ROY TO THE RIGHT AND I JUST REMEMBERD WE SHOULD OF TOOK A GPS BEFORE WE LEFT. OH WELL, I GUESS WE ARE GOING TO HAVE TO RELY ON PURE LUCK AND INSTINCT! SOUNDS LIKE (SURVIVOR MAN) TO ME! THATS A REALITY TV SHOW IF YOU DIDN'T KNOW. ANYWAY ELLA AND I STARTED WALKING AROUND ALMOST LOOKING LIKE NOMADS.
"Whats that"? she said.
I LOOKED OVER AND COULD NOT BELIEVE OUR LUCK. A TEACHER WAS STANDING RIGHT THERE. HE LOOKED ALMOST AS CLUELESS AS WE DID.SOMETHING WAS DEFFINANTLY WRONG! THEN HE TURNED AROUND AND I HAD TO THINK FAST I GRABBED ELLA AND JUMPED INTO A BLUEBERRY BUSH! WAIT THIS BLUE BERRY BUSH SEEMS VERY VAGULEY FAMILAIR. I HAVE SEEN THIS BLUEBERRY BUSH! I LOOKED OVER AT ELLA AND SHE WAS EATING BLUEBERRIES. WAIT FIRE AND BLUEBERRIES , PICKING, ITS FROM MY DREAM! I LOOKED AT ELLA AND THAN AT THE BUSH. I LOOKED BACK AND SAW SMOKE, I STARTED RUNNING. IT WAS LIKE I WAS HAVING THE DREAM OVER AGAIN. THIS FELT MORE REAL. MY HEART WAS RACING SO FAST AS I STARTED RUNNING I DIDN'T HAVE TIME TO THINK I JUST KEPT RUNNING AS FAST AS MY LEGS WOULD TAKE ME.
"Where are you running two ,Angel? Ella said.
I DIDN'T HAVE TIME TO ANSWER HER I JUST KEPT RUNNING WITHOUT LOOKING BACK. MY DREAM STARTED TO COME BACK TO ME I GOT CLOSER AND COULD HEAR THE SCREAMS OF PEOPLE. I COULD START TO FEEL THE HEAT OF THE FIRE. THE SCENT OF BLOOD. ALL MY SENSES WERE LIKE THEY WERE REBORN AGAIN AND BECAME SHARP,KEEN. I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT I COULD DO HOW TO STOP IT BUT AS I REACHED THE VILLAGE, MY HOME, I SAW WHAT I WISHED I WOULD NEVER SEE. CHILDREN,WOMEN,FRIENDS,MAN, ALL BUTCHERED. I COULD DO NOTHER BUT SCREAM JUST LIKE I DID IN MY DREAM. I WAS FROZEN. I WISH THIS WAS A DREAM I PINCHED MYSELF BUT THIS TIME I DIDN'T WAKE UP! I FELL TO MY KNEES WHEN I SAW MY FAMILY JUST LAYING THERE LIKE A CORPSE. I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT TO DO EXCEPT LAY THERE AND CRY. FINALLY I HEARD ANOTHER SCREAM AND TURNED.
"Aaaaaaahhhh.," Ella screamed.
I COULD DO NOTHING BUT LOOK AT HER AND SHE WALKED OVER TO ME AND WE BOTH GRABBED EACHOTHER AND STARTED TO CRY. I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT I COULD DO. I COULDN'T HELP THEM. I GOT UP AND JUST STARTED RUNNING TO THE NEAREST VILLAGE. I COULDN'T STOP CRYING. MY DREAM, MY DREAM CAME TRUE! I JUST KEPT RUNNING BUT THAN A THOUGHT CAME TWO ME WHERE WERE ROY AND KENAI? WHAT ABOUT THE TEACHER TWO? OH WELL I COUDLN'T WORRY ABOUT THAT NOW I FINALLY REACHED THE VILLAGE I RAN RIGHT INTO THE MAYOR'S OFFICE AND EXPLAINED WHAT HAPPEND.
"Mayor, Mayor," I cried.
"What is it?, he said.?
"My village, my village was all slaughtered, i said balling.
I COULDN'T SAY IT, SUCH A HORRIBLE TO THINK ABOUT, LIKE A HORROR MOVIE. I WAS TO SHOCKED TO SAY ANYMORE AND THE MAYOR FINALLY CALLED SOMEONE AND THAN SAID YOU STAY HERE IM GOING TO CHECK IT OUT. CHECK IT OUT I THOUGHT? MOMMA AND DADDY AND EVEN LITTLE BROTHER ARE DEAD AND ALL YOU CAN SAY IS IM GOING TO CHECK IT OUT? THAN THE THOUGHT CAME TO ME, WHO BURNED MY VILLAGE? WHO WOULD DO SUCH A THING? I DIDN'T KNOW BUT WHO EVER DID IT WAS GOING TO PAY, AND I WAS GOING TO MAKE SURE THEY PAY! I JUST SAT THERE FOR I DON'T KNOW HOW LONG AND THAN THE MAYOR CAME BACK INTO THE ROOM.
"Miss?," he said.
"Its Angelique," I said, actually finally composing myself.
"Okay,Angelique, we have a few suspects of who might of done this," he said sounding all proffessional.
I said angrily, "Who, who was it"?
"The suspects are Kenai and Roy",he said.
"What?," i said practically now furious!
ITS NOT THEM, I KNEW THAT FOR SURE. THEY MAY OF NOT BEEN HURT IN THE FIRE BECAUSE THEY WERE OUT WITH ELLA AND I. ITS NOT THEM. THEY WOULD NOT DO SUCH A HORRIBLE THING!
I looked up at the mayor and said, "Its not those two."
THEN SOMETHING I DREAMED NEVER ABOUT SEEING HAPPEND. THE TEACHER WALKED INTO THE MAYOR'S CLASSROOM! I AT MR EVIL 2. I WAS SPEECHLESS. IT WAS HIM! I KNOW IT WAS!
"Mayor, it was him, that guy right there," I yelled.
"Him?, the mayor said, that man right there is the one who helped the wounded out of the fire"!
WHAT I THOUGHT TO MYSELF.IT IS HIM, I KNOW IT. NO MATTER HOW MUCH HE LIES I KNOW IT WAS HIM. BUT HOW CAN I GET THE MAYOR TO BELIEVE ME?
" It's him, i know it, he murdered my family and friends"!
" This girl clearly is not thinking right from the shock," Mr. Evil said.
WHAT! IM NOT SUFFERING FROM THE SHOCK! OKAY MAYBE I NEED A CHILL PILL, BUT IM NOT INSANE. HE IS JUST TRYING TO COVER UP WHAT HE IS DONE. WHAT SHOULD I DO GET HIM TO BELIEVE ME? I NEED TO THINK QUICK OR THEY MAY BELIEVE HIM AND THINK IM INSANE!
The mayor looked at me and said, " Angelique, this man saved some of the people, he is not the criminal here."
Mr. Evil said, "Why would the criminal help save people"?
I looked at him and screamed, " You are decieving everyone, you didn't help anyone"!
"Okay now, miss Angelique , I think that you need to calm down and think right now."
THEY DON'T BELIEVE ME DO THEY? THEY THINK I AM MAKIN ALL OF THIS UP. I NEED TO GET OUT OF HERE AND FIND MY FRIENDS. MAYBE, ROY AND KENAI FIND A LEAD OR MAYBE THEY DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT HAPPEND.
"I need to get some fresh air," I said calmly.
"Sure, that sounds like a marvalouse idea," the mayor replied.
I WALKED OUTSIDE AND LOOKED BACK, MR EVIL 2 WAS JUST WATCHING ME, LIKE HE WAS STUDING ME , SEEING WHAT IM GOING TO DO NEXT. I LOOKED BACK AND SMILED. THEN I STARTED BOOKING IT BACK THROUGH THE WOODS TWO MY BURNED DOWN VILLAGE TO FIND ELLA AND THE OTHERS. I WAS RUNNING AND THAN I HIT SOMETHING, OUCH THAT HURT, I WAS NOT EVEN PAYING ATTENTION WHERE I WAS GOING. I LOOKED UP IT WAS KENAI!
"Angel,he yelled, I finally found you"!
"Kenai, do you what happend?, I said, feeling the tears comming back to my eyes.
"No, all that I saw was smoke and Im trying to make my way towards it, why wat happend?", he said.
"They were all murded, it was horrible," I screached.
Kenai said," Who was murded, what are you talking about, Angel are you okay"?
"Yes, i said sarcastically, im perfectly fine after seeing our whole village anialated."
I FINALLY LOOKED AT KEANAI, WHY WAS HE COVERED IN BLOOD? THAN I SAW KENAI STARTED RUNNING TOWARDS OUR VILLIAGE. I STARTED TO FOLLOW HIM WHEN WE REACHED OUR VILLAGE, THERE WAS ELLA STILL LYING WHERE I LEFT HER. SHE LOOKED UP AT US.
"What should we do," she said crying?
WHY WHEN THERE IS ALWAYS A PROBLEM DO THEY LOOK AT ME TO TRY AND FIX IT? IN THIS SITUATION I DON'T REALLY KNOW WHAT TO DO RIGHT NOW BUT TO FIND ROY AND THAN FIGURE OUT WHY KENAI IS COVERED IN BLOOD!
I looked at Kenai and said, "Wheres Roy"?
"I don't know, Kenai said, we got seperated during the simulation."
ROY PROBABLY SAID SOMETHING THAT MADE KENAI MAD, AND THEN KENAI PROBABLY STOMPED AWAY , IN HIS LITTLE POUT FASE! WELL THATS NOT THE PROBLEM RIGHT NOW. WE NEED TO FIND SOMEONE THAT WILL BELIEVE US AND FAST.
"Royyyyyy", I yelled at the top of my lungs.
"Roooooooooyyyy,Rooooooy,", Kenai and Ella joined in.
THERE WAS NO ANSWER, COME ON ROY THIS IS NOT TIME TO BE PLAYING HIDE AND SEEK FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE! I LOOKED AROUND AND THEN AT MY FRIENDS. BAD THINGS HAPPEND AND THERE IS NO GOING BACK NOW, I HAVE GOT TO GET THAT IN MY HEAD, BUT THE WIERD THING IS THAT MY DREAM CAME TRUE, I NEED TO FIND ANSWERES.FINDING THEM IS NOT GOING TO DO ANYONE GOOD IF IM JUST STANDING AROUND HERE.
"I am leaving," I said to my friends.
"Where are you going," Ella said?
Kenai looked at me and said, "Your going to find answers arn't you"?
"Yes, I am, I answered.
"And what have you guys been up two", a voice far to familiar said.
I WHIPPED MY HEAD AROUND AND SAW MR EVIL 2 AND ROY STANDING THERE! ROY? WHAT IS ROY DOING WITH MR. EVIL 2? WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON HERE? AM I MISSING SOMETHING?
"Am i missing something," I shouted?
ELLA WALKED OVER TO ROY AND MR EVIL 2. WAT THE HECK?
"Angelique,Ella said, your so naive."
"What is going on here, I said in disbelief"?
"You havn't cought on yet, Angelique,Kenai," Roy said.
ELLA JUST LAUGHED. WHAT THE HELL AND YES I DID JUST SAY HELL!
"Roy and I are the ones that planned the whole thing, Angel," Ella said.
"You wat," Kenai said flabergasted."
WHAT? THIS CANNOT BE, ELLA AND ROY, NO, SOMETHING'S NOT RIGHT HERE! WHAT SHOULD I DO? THEY MUST BE LYING OR SOMETHING, BECAUSE LITTLE, SWEET ELLA WOULD NEVER DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS. I KNOW SHE WOULDN'T AND NEITHER WOULD ROY.
"Why, I said, would you do something like this?"
"Don't you understand, Angelique,"Ella said.
I looked at Ella and said angrily,"NO, i don't understand but help me too."
"Why should we explain ourselfs too you? You don't even know why we did this in the first place," Roy said.
Kenai said, "Why"?
"The people in the village were not right int he head, you know that very well," Mr Evil 2 said.
"You just mind you own business and stay out of this," I yelled to him!
WHY WOULD THEY DO SUCH A HORRIBLE THING? I KNOW SOME OF THE CHOICES OUR VILLAGE MADE WAS NOT RIGHT.HOW THEY PUT ELLA'S PARENTS IN JAIL FOR SOMETHING THEY DID NOT DO AND ROY'S PARENTS WERE THROWN OUT OF THE CITY AND HE WAS LEFT TO LIVE ALONE. I KNOW THOSE WERE HORRIBLE THINGS THAT NO HUMAN BEING SHOULD OF TO GO THROUGH, BUT YEAH s**t HAPPENS. THEY WERE NOT THE TYPE OF PEOPLE TO HOLD GRUDGES, WELL SO I THOUGHT ANYWAY. I DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW ELLA AND ROY DID IT THOUGHT, ROY WAS WITH KENAI AND ELLA WAS WITH ME THE WHOLE TIME. HOW COULD THEY HAVE DONE THE CRIME?
"Kenai, was Roy with you the whole time during the simulation," I said curiously.
Kenai looked like he just answered his own riddle and slowly said,"No, we were seperated half way through."
I FINALLY STARTED TO UNDERSTAND. ELLA ACTUALLY DIDN'T DO THE MURDER SHE HELLPED PLANNED AND NOW I SEE WHY ELLA AND ROY WERE SO HAPPY THAT THEY GOT PICKED TO DO THE SIMULATION. BECAUSE THEY WERE IN ON IT WITH MR EVIL 2. IT'S ALL STARTING TO MAKE SENSE NOW! WHY DID'NT IS SEE THIS BEFORE?
"Ella, how could you do such a thing, and how did i not see it," I tried tos ay as calmly as possible.
" I was suffering, they took what I loved most away from me," Ella said.
"Ella, I tried to say understandingly, I know that sometimes they didn't make the right descision but there was no need to kill anyone."
"Thats because they didn't take you family away from you," Ella said.
I said ferousely, "NO, Ella, they didn't take my family away from me, you did!"
I NOTICED THE WHOLE TIME THAT KENAI WAS ALWAYS RIGHT ABOUT ROY AND ELLA AND I COULD NOT SEE IT BEFORE. HE SAID I WAS BLINDED BY THEIR FAKE LIES. HE WAS ALWAYS RIGHT, WHY DIDN'T I SEE IT UNTIL NOW? MAN, THERE ARE SO MANY THINGS IM REALIZING IN ONE DAY, I DON'T HAVE TIME TO FIGURE IT OUT NOW. WAIT, WHAT'S THAT NOISE? IT SOUNDS LIKE HORSES. I THINK THE MAYOR OF THE OTHER TOWN FINALLY REALIZED WHAT HAPPEND.THEN THERE WAS SOMETHING FLYING AT ME AND KEANI. IT WAS RED PAINT? WAT IT WAS ALL OVER MY CLOTHES? THE PEOPLE ARRIVED.
"Thank you Mr. Neeway for calling us here," said the man in front on the horse.
"Whats happening, and why is their paint on us," Kenai whispered to me?
"I don't know yet, hush," I said back to him.
The main on the horse looked at Kenai and I and spoke," We hearby arrest Angelique and Kenai for the crime of murdering the village."
THATS RIGHT I THOUGHT TO MYSELF ROY, ELLA, AND MR. EVIL ARE ARRESTED. WAIT, HE JUST SAID KENAI'S AND MINE NAME! I HAD TO OF HEARD THAT WRONG , WHY WOULD THEY THINK WE DID IT? THATS WHEN I REALIZED IT, WE WERE SET UP, WE HAD PAINT ON US THAT LOOKED EXACTLY LIKE BLOOD. ROY, ELLA, AND MR. EVIL DIDN'T HAVE A DROP OF RED ON THEM, THEY MUST HAVE CHANGED! THEY PROBABLY CALLED THEM AND SAID THEY COUGHT THE CRIMINAL AND LIED THEIR WAY OUT OF THIS! THIS DAY JUST WENT FROM HORRIBLE TO HELL!
"We didn't do anything mister, it was them,....they set us up, I swear it," Kenai pleaded.
"Angelique and Kenai are now going to be taken for jail for the crimes they have commited," the hourse guy said sternly.
Kenai tried again, "But....please...you must understand...."
I KNEW NOW THAT THERE WAS NO WAY THEY WOULD BELIEVE US NOW. WE WERE IN WHAT SOME PEOPLE SAY "WE ARE IN A PICKLE". WELL, I'M NOT GOING TO SAY THAT BECAUSE WE'RE NOT IN A PICKLE WE'RE IN MUCH, MUCH WORSE! WE WERE FRAMED, AND NOT BYE JUST ANYONE BY MY TWO BEST FRIENDS! I DON'T REALLY THINK THERE IS ANY WAY TO TALK OUR WAY OUT OF THIS ONE, BUT THERE IS NO WAY IM GOING TO JAIL, LET ALONE FOR SOMETHING I DIDN'T EVEN DO! I THINK HERES MY PLAN AND I NEED TO THINK FAST. WE'RE GOING TO RUN AS FAST AS WE CAN AWAY FROM HERE AND AS FAR AS WE CAN, BUT I'LL BE BACK FOR MY REVENGE! I LOOKED AT KENAI, WHO WAS STILL TRYING TO TALK HIS WAY OUT OF THIS SITUATION.
"Kenai, I whispered, Run"!
I GRABBED HIS HAND, PULLED HIM, AND STARTED RUNNING IN THE OPPOSITE DIRECTION. I DIDN'T STOP UNTIL WE WERE FAR AWAY. I COULD HERE THE MEN YELLING IN THE DISTANCE. I STOPPED TO CATCH OUR BREATH.
"If i may say so myself that was the dumbest idea in the history of ideas," Kenai said.
I looked at him and said irratiadedly," Okay, Mr. idea, what would your amazing idea of been"?
"I have no idea,he said,but it would of been better than that!"
HE WAS SERIOUSLY GETTING ON MY LAST NERVE, OKAY MAYBE IT WASN'T THE GREATEST IDEA, BUT AT LEAST IT WAS AN IDEA NONE THE LESS! HE PROBABLY COULDN'T OF EVEN THOUGHT OF AN IDEA. HE IS REALLY GETTING IRRITATING! I SAVED HIS BUTT FOR NOW AND THIS IS HOW HE THANKS ME? SOME THANK YOU!
" Im thirsty," Kenai whined.
"So am I, but you don't see me complaining," I retorted.
"Search for them immidiatly," a man shouted.
OH CRAP! THEY CAUGHT UP WITH US ALREADY! KEANAI AND I ARE IN PRETTY GOOD SHAPE TOO. OKAY THINK ANGELIQUE, THINK, IF THESE PROFESSIONAL COPS ARE CHASING YOU, WHERE WOULD YOU HIDE?
Why would you wait until later to fix spelling errors that you know are there...?

Anyway, you might want to insert a blank line between paragraphs, so that the story is easier to read, and to ease back on all the caps lock. Remember that writing in caps is equivalent to shouting, so don't abuse it. It gets annoying.

Good luck!~
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i agree with the person above me and yeah you need some spelling help and some grammar english help lol larry you should put me in this i can meet you in the woods lol but it is sorta along the lines of naruto and vampire knight lol still good job and if you ever need help feel free to ask me

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