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Kingdom Hearts: The Forgotten Stars



Prologue

World: ???

‘This world is dark, so black. Where is this place? What is this place?’

A cloaked figure appears in a world of only darkness. When the figure takes a step forward, the ground lights up revealing a grey platform. “So I’m dreaming again,” the figure says. A giant creature appeared from the darkness, the creature looked like a giant gold knight with a giant gold sword, and on its head is a weird symbol (I haven’t decided what the symbol looks like yet). “So… they are awake now,” the figure says, “So be it… but you’re not coping my body without a fight.” And a keyblade appears in the figures had, the keyblade is white and is blinding bright.



Boss Match: ???

This match teaches the player how to play. It pretty much impossible to lose. I’m not going to get into detail on this boss match like I will others.



Chapter 1

World: Radiant Garden

In the middle of town, a white portal opens up and a girl with long blond hair comes rolling out of it. The girl hits a wall, and the portal disappears behind her. The girl then gets up and dusts off her white dress. “That was a rough one, right,” she says pulling a white elephant stuff animal out of her big white bag she carries, and puts it on her shoulder. The she looks around with her big green eyes, “Where are we now, Mr. Snuffles?”

Yuffie watches from the top of the building as the girl entered the world. “You’re in Radiant Garden!” Yuffie says coming down to meet the girl, “I’m the Great Ninja Yuffie!”

“My name is Candy,” the girl says getting a big smile, “Candy the Traveler of Worlds, I travel the universe in search for fun,” then she made a sad face, “but unfortunately, some people don’t like to have fun.” Then she smiled again.

Yuffie looks at her, “Uh… ok… Hey come with me…” she grabs Candy’s hand and drags her off thinking to herself, ‘there is something not right about this girl. I got a bad feeling about her. Maybe Leon can find out about her.’

“Where are we going?” Candy asks, as Yuffie drags her off.

A shadowy figure appears after they have left, “So this is another world… Candy here somewhere.”





Chapter 2

Sora, Donald, and Goofy enter Radiant Garden, after getting a message from Leon.

“I wonder what Leon wants?” Sora asks then thinks to himself. Before Donald or Goofy can say anything Sora bumps into someone and falls to the ground. Sora gets up and looks at the person he bumped into. The person is someone he never seen before. She was a short girl, with long blond hair that was in two ponytails, her pony tails was tied by black ribbons that made that stuck up, she wore black and red dress, had brownish reddish eyes, and was accompanied by a big black cat (that caught her when she fail down) and a small fat red bat.

“How dare run into the Princess like that! What’s the big idea?” The bat speaks.

The girl gets up and the cat speaks, “You should really watch where you are going, kid. You may never know when you’ll bump into the wrong person.”

The girl smacks them both on the head, “OW! Princess, what was that for?” They both complain.

“I’m sorry for their rudeness,” the girl says, “I have to go now, maybe we’ll meet again.” Then she just walks off.

“Princess wait!” the bat says fallowing her.

“Consider yourself lucky, kid,” the cat says fallowing the bat.

“Uh…” Sora looks confused, “That was weird, who where they?”

“I don’t know,” Donald says, “but I think they are up to no good.”

“We better get going to Merlin’s house,” Sora says, “Leon is waiting for us.”



When they arrive at Merlin’s house, Leon, Cid, and Aerith were waiting for them. “About time you get here,” Leon says.

“Yea…” Sora says, “We bumped into this odd girl and her pets on our way here. She wore a black and red dress, and she looks sort of like a… uh… rabbit.”

Cid says, “Yea… we’ve seen her around here. Have no idea what she’s doing here.”

“I sent Yuffie to keep an eye on her,” Leon says, “but she’s not why we sent for you. There is this other girl, Yuffie found a while back.”

Aerith says, “Yea… Candy… for some reason we believe that she’s connected to you somehow. Candy… can you come here please.”

Candy came from behind the corner, “Yes! What is in Miss Aerith?”

When Sora looks at Candy, his eyes widen, and all these images of these people he never seen before start to flow though his head, until finally a picture of a young girl who looks like Candy appeared in his mind.

“What’s wrong Sora?” Leon asks.

Sora shakes his head and looks at Leon, “Uh… nothing. Who is she?”

“ME!” Candy says jumping in front of Sora’s face smiling, “I’m Candy the traveler of worlds, and this is Mr. Snuffles!” She shoves the stuffed elephant into Sora’s face.

Sora smiles at her, “I’m Sora and these are my friends Donald and Goofy.” Donald, Goofy, and Sora greet Candy.

“Hey Candy,” Sora says, “Do you know a short girl who wears a black and red dress, and looks resembles a rabbit.”

Candy thinks for a while, “Uh… hmm… um… OH! I know… Rachel! She’s a boring, mean, vampire. All she does is sit there and drinks tea. I went to her world and stayed at her castle for a few days. She’s really boring, you think she’ll be fun at first, I mean she looks so cute, like a cute little doll, but she’s no fun. And when you try to play with her, she blows you away, because she can control the wind and lighting, or she starts talking about something, but I never listen to her because she’s so boring, or she starts insulting you, because she’s a meany head. But I guess Gii was kind of fun, he’s a fat red bat. Nago, the cat, was mean, so was her butler… errr… what’s his face. And when Rachel starts to insult you, the other three jump in and start to insult you too. I don’t know why I stayed there, maybe because she wouldn’t let me leave, something about “…interrupting the course of the world…” or something like that, so she didn’t let me go to other parts of the world. Hmm… for being a vampire, she never tired to suck my blood or anything. Weird, for a vampire, maybe she doesn’t like the taste or something… hmmm oh well. Why you ask, you went to her world too?”

“Um… no,” Sora says, “I bumped into her on my way here.”

Candy looks at him confused, “Wait, Rachel is here. Why? For me maybe… no she showed no interest in me. Hmm…” Then she starts giggling, “Doesn’t she know she’s “…interrupting the course of this world…”. I want to go bug her! Let’s go make fun of her, like she does me!” Candy grabs Sora’s hand and drags him out of Merlin’s house. Donald and Goofy soon fallow.

“There they go,” Leon says, “Candy’s an odd one. There something just wrong about her.”

“I feel it too,” Aerith asks, “Her presence gives an odd aura. What do think is wrong about her?”

“I don’t know,” Leon says, “maybe because she’s been to so many different world, it kind messed with her a bit. I know Yuffie felt it too. Maybe this Rachel person felt it also, and that’s why she’s here.”



Chapter 3

Sora, Donald, Goofy, and Candy found the girl Sora bumped into earlier just outside Merlin’s house.

“HEY! RABBIT!” Candy yells.

The girl looks over at Candy, “There you are, Candy. I’ve been looking for you.”

“OH! Really…” Candy looks confused, “Why?”

“Isn’t that obvious, buffoon,” she says, “I’m here to kill you.”

“EEK!” Candy screams, “You’re kidding right? You’re not going to kill me. I thought we were friends.”

“OH MY! You are terribly mistaken,” the girl says, “You are plague among worlds. You travel world to world ruining the consent flow of the world. You cause the worlds to get off its destined path, causing turmoil, and then causes to world to wither and die. Darkness fallows you… but you know that. Don’t you. That’s why you are always running away. Running from the darkness that eats the worlds after you’ve been to them. It would be best if you just let the darkness eat you, and have it over with, but no. You are a stubborn little brat, so it’s up to me to wipe off the face of this universe.” The black cat transforms into an umbrella and the girl hold it the umbrella above her head.

“I don’t understand what you are saying,” Candy starts to cry, “What are you talking about? I don’t understand.”

“How can you understand? You have a hard time understanding the most basic of concepts, let alone the complexity that fallows you.”

Sora runs in front of Candy, his keyblade appearing in his hand. “I don’t care who you are, or what Candy has done, but I’m not going to let you hurt her.”

“Is that a keyblade?” the girl says, “I’ve been told stories of the Keyblade Wielders, but to think to you… a mere child, is a one of them… and you are so rash too… looks like I must kill you too.”

“We’ll fight you too,” Donald says running beside Sora.

“Welp Yea, we’ll fight you too,” Goofy runs beside Sora.

The girl shakes her head, “No no… this won’t do at all, only the buffoon and the Keyblade Wielder. Nago… get rid of these two… beasts.” The cat umbrella transforms into a cannon, and fires a red ball at Sora, then turns back into an umbrella. Sora dodges to red ball, but when it hits the ground in turns into a rod that sticks out of the ground and at the top of the rod was bat shaped, and electricity surrounds the top. The lighting struck the rod and electricity went all around the rod, zapping those who were near, who was just Donald and Goofy. Donald and Goofy both collapse after that.

“Donald, Goofy!” Sora yells, “That’s it!”



Boss Match: Rachel Alucard

You get Candy on your team for this match. She can use magic like Donald, but her spells are a lot stronger, but takes a fewer more seconds before using them to use, and she can’t use cure. She start off with the spells Demi (which is a gravity attack spell that loosens gravity), Gravity (Gravity attack spell that increases gravity), Flare (Minor attack spell), and Protect (which creates a barrier). As the game goes on she gains other spells such as Meteor, Quake, Reflect, Holy, Bio, Ultra, and other familiar Final Fantasy spells. She can also summon creatures if you party is missing a member. She starts with Ifirit (fire monster), Shiva (Ice monster), and Ramus (Thunder monster). She also gains Odin, Behomut, Gilgamesh, Cactaur, Leviathan, and other familiar Final Fantasy monsters.

Rachel is not that tough of a boss match, if you stay close to her, and stay away from her thunder rods (that she can only have three at a time) and her electric frogs that zap you then disappear. The match is actually more like you are fighting Nago the cat and Gii the bat, more than Rachel herself. Nago performs most of her attacks, and Gii is usually used as a shield. When you get past Gii, Nago actually takes the hit, not Rachel. When both Gii and Nago and fallen in health you win the battle. Once the battle begins, Candy will summon one of her summons, at random. If the summon has been taken out, and Sora is low on health, Yuffie will appear to help you fight. This boss shouldn’t be tough, you should have no problem defeating Rachel.



Rachel starts smiling and clapping, “Great job!”

“Huh…” Sora looks at her worn out and confused.

“You proved to me that you are strong enough for the trials yet to come,” Rachel says.

“So you weren’t trying to kill us?” Candy asks.

“Oh! I was,” Rachel says, “Sort of, if you have disappointed me, I would have killed you. But I wasn’t trying to kill you, if I was I would have showed you my true power. But I’m impressed, how powerful a fool and a child are.”

“What are these trials?” Sora asks.

Rachel looks at him, “You familiar with the Nobodys and the Heartless are you not?” Sora nods and Rachel continues, “But there is a third enemy, the memories and mind of those who have given their hearts to darkness, The Forgotten. Like the other two they have no heart. Like the Nobody, the Forgotten do not exist and fallow a certain more powerful Forgotten, known as The Forsaken. Unlike Organization 13, The Forsaken wishes not to find existence, but to destroy those that do exist. They wish to destroy Kingdom Hearts. Most Forgotten look like this.” A small golden ball with an odd symbol appeared, “But The Forsaken… they take form, personality, and the powers of a certain individual of their specific being they where once where, knew. Like, let’s says that duck,” Rachel points at Donald, “was to become a Heartless, and was powerful enough to produce one of The Forsaken. The Forsaken could take the form of you, Sora, or anyone else that the duck knew, usually a very close friend or sometimes a feared enemy, usually whichever is more powerful. The Forsaken have ten members as of now. And for some odd reason, they’ve taken an interest in Candy. They fallow you Candy they watch you Candy. I wouldn’t be suppressed if they are watching us right now. Did you know that Candy?” Candy just looks at her with a confused look on her face, “Thought not… Anyways… See you around Child and Buffoon, I’m missing my dinner.” With that, a portal appears and Rachel and her pets jump though it and disappear.

“Wait!” Sora yells, “I still got some questions to ask you?” but she was gone already.

Candy looks at Sora, “Did you catch anything she just said? All I heard was Blah…blah…blah… blah… She so boring.”

Sora looks up at the sky, “I understood some of it…”

Then they hear a voice, “Hey There!” They turn around to see ten cloaked figures. They looked pretty much the same with those clocks on, but only one stuck out, because it was in a wheelchair. The one that was behind the wheelchair one was obviously the one that shouted. It was pointing at them.



Chapter 4

“You know, Candy,” one of the cloaked figures says with a sort of soft male voice, “You’re pretty hard to track down.”

“Lucky for us,” another one says, this one had a sinister snake like voice, “You decided to stay with that stupid vampire for so long.”

“We weren’t going to show ourselves to you yet,” another one says with a cold female voice, “but that idiot rabbit already opened her big mouth about us.”

“And don’t forget,” the one in the wheelchair says, with a girly voice, “This one had to open her big mouth, too.”

“OW!” the one behind the wheelchair one cries out, grabbing its head, “That really hurts you know…” It had a girly voice too, but its voice is more cheery.

“What are you talking about?” Candy looks confusingly at them.

“Didn’t you listen to the rabbit,” the one behind the wheelchair says, “We are The Forsaken. OW!” it grabs its head again, “What was that one for?”

“You guys are after Candy?” Sora asks.

“YEP! OW! Fine… I’ll shut up now…”

“Yes we are,” the first one that spoke says, “She is vital for our plans.”

“Plans?” Candy says, “What do you need me for?”

“What you don’t know?! OW! OK… OK…. I get it…”

“You must come with us, Candy,” Another one says, this one had an old cold male voice.

“But I don’t want too,” Candy says, “You people scare me…”

“But if you refuse,” the wheelchair one says, “we have to you force to, and that means I get to play her friends, right?” Its head turns to one of the other, who nods. “YAY!! So what will it be, Candy?”

“No!” Candy says, “I’m not going with you.”

“HEY!” the wheelchair one says, “You hear that! Take me to them.”

“OW!” The one behind the wheelchair says, “Yes… Yes… I hear… Lazy bum, why can’t you push yourself… OW! Ok… OK…” Then it starts pushing the wheelchair.

Then King Mickey appears from seemingly nowhere and hits the one pushing the wheelchair on the head.

“OW!” it says, “Why me?”

“Are ok?” King Mickey asks Candy and Sora.

“Yea we are ok,” Sora says.

“OH Look!” Wheelchair person laughs, “I want to play with the cute little mousey!”

“You should get out of here,” King Mickey says, “I’ll handle them.”

Candy nods, “Yea yea… I want to get out of here…”

Sora looks at Candy, she looks terrified, and then he nods, “We better go then.”

Sora and Candy pick up Donald and Goofy and retreats to the Gummie Ship.

Sora asks Candy, “You are scared of them aren’t you?” Candy doesn’t speak, just nods.

After a while Candy asks, “Where are we headed?”

“I don’t know…” Sora says looking at the map.

“Where ever we go better be long away from them…”



Chapter 5

World: Olympus/ The Underworld



“This time,” Hades says, “I’ll bring forth a being of pure evil.”

“Isn’t that what you said last time,” Pete says.

“But this time it’s different,” Hades says, “the dead has increased dramatically, and some of these beings are very powerful.”

“Can you bring one of these ‘being’ back from the dead?” Maleficent asks.

“Of course,” Hades says as smoke arises from his caldron.

“This one is perfect…”



World: ???


Wheelchair The Forsaken member looks up at the sky, “Hmm… Come on Lilith we are leaving.”

Another member says, “Where are we going?! OW!”

“Don’t be so loud. Just come on, we going to have some fun, but don’t tell the others… I’m already in enough trouble as it is.”



World: Olympus/ The Underworld



Sora, Donald, Goofy, and Candy arrive at Olympus.

“So what are we doing here?” Donald asks.

“Just getting away from those creeps we met earlier,” Sora says.

“And to find some fun!” Candy smiles. Then heartless appear. “EEK!” Candy screams and runs behind Sora, “Boogey Monsters!”

“huh… Boogey monsters?” Sora looks at her.

After defeating Heartless…

“YAY!” Candy screams, “We kick Boogey Monster butt!”
“Why do you call them ‘Boogey Monsters’?” Sora asks her

“OH!” Candy turns to him, “Because they are black and scary, and the first I ever saw them I was asleep and they woke me up, like the Boogey Man, so they are Boogey Monster! Why? That’s not what they are really called?”

Sora, Donald, and Goofy laugh. “No…” Sora says, “They are called Heartless, they are the hearts of those who have given into the darkness.”

“OH…” Candy says, “Those are the Heartless… people always mention Heartless to me… but I never really knew what they were talking about…”

Sora walks up to the Coliseum and knocks on the door, with no answer. “Huh… weird…” Sora says, “Come on!” He runs into The Underworld.

After wondering around The Underworld a little…

Sora, Donald, Goofy, and Candy find Hercules and Sir Aaron standing in front of a strange person. This person wore a black robe, and had a metal helmet. The indentions on the helmet made it seem like it was grinning at you. It sat on the floor curled in a ball.

“What’s going on?” Sora asks, “Who is that?”

“Your guess is as good as mine,” Hercules says.

“It’s a monster brought back from the dead,” Sir Aaron says, “I watched Hades bring from back from the dead. It’s a heartless creature with no appreciation for life, that goes by the name Lucy.”

The person stands up, and walks towards them. Sora, Donald, Goofy, Sir Aaron, and Hercules prepare to fight. Candy looks at it and says, “Uh… Sora… uh… I think it’s crying.”

They all look at her, “What?” Then Aaron is hit with an unknown force and flies back.



Boss Match: Lucy

Suggested Team: Candy and Donald. You have Sir Aaron and Hercules as guests outside your party.

Lucy is a tough boss match, her attacks are invisible so you don’t know when it’s coming, and she has an invisible force that protects her from most attack (Only Candy’s demi and gravity spells can get though). Your large party helps a lot in this match, because the only way to actually hit her is the hit her when she’s busy attacking another someone else, cause her protection disappears then. Her attacks are strong, but you should have Donald to heal you with cure, and Candy’s protect spell to shield you, and don’t forget about potions. If you keep everyone healed up, you’ll have Lucy beaten in no time. You can also do a special attack with Hercules that breaks her protection and stuns her.

Too be contunued
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i thought Kairi was the princess of Radiant Garden
LiliaAlice
i thought Kairi was the princess of Radiant Garden


I know she's a Princess of Heart, but I'm not sure if she's an actual princess. I gues we'll have to wait and see.

Incidetally, this fic is...kinda lame. As often seems to be the case, when an 'original character' enters the scene, practically all focus goes on them. Take the above scene where Sora, Donald and Goofy enter Merlin's house. Every character in the house seems to be almost fixated on this 'Candy' character;she's all they talk about. This often seems to be the problem with OC's; of course they are relevant to the fanfic's plot, but a disproportionate amount of the other character's actions revolves around them as a result.

There's nothing wrong with a little focus on your OC;it helps to flesh them out as part of the narrative. But when EVERYONE else in the story does nothing but talk about them, think about them or wonder what they're doing at times when they might be doing something else in the plot, it kind of makes the other characters feel like props on a set.

'Aerith says, “Yea… Candy… for some reason we believe that she’s connected to you somehow. Candy… can you come here please.”'

I'm gonna take a wild guess here-she's here to protect Sora using the Keyblade, right? Do you know how many times that's been written already? It just seems so redundant, considering that Sora already HAS a Keyblade AND Donald and Goofy are there to keep an eye on him, as per King Mickey's request BACK IN THE FIRST GAME.

Give your your character some actual relevance to the events of the story. That's the most important thing.
Pietro Pumpkin

I'm gonna take a wild guess here-she's here to protect Sora using the Keyblade, right? Do you know how many times that's been written already? It just seems so redundant, considering that Sora already HAS a Keyblade AND Donald and Goofy are there to keep an eye on him, as per King Mickey's request BACK IN THE FIRST GAME.


You are way wrong. Candy's relevants to Sora is not to reveled until the battle with The Forsaken Leader (I could spoil it for you if you want, but'll have to exlpain a whole lot). Candy is only following Sora because as long as she's with Sora The Forsaken won't try to kill her. Candy is too stupid to even realize she's connected to Sora. I have alot more of this story writen...
Ayanea
Pietro Pumpkin

I'm gonna take a wild guess here-she's here to protect Sora using the Keyblade, right? Do you know how many times that's been written already? It just seems so redundant, considering that Sora already HAS a Keyblade AND Donald and Goofy are there to keep an eye on him, as per King Mickey's request BACK IN THE FIRST GAME.


You are way wrong. Candy's relevants to Sora is not to reveled until the battle with The Forsaken Leader (I could spoil it for you if you want, but'll have to exlpain a whole lot). Candy is only following Sora because as long as she's with Sora The Forsaken won't try to kill her. Candy is too stupid to even realize she's connected to Sora. I have alot more of this story writen...


That's cool. Most people tend to write the kind of plot I mentioned above, so it's great to hear that you're trying something different. By the way, I like the name 'The Forsaken', most people call their KH-style monsters 'Endless' or 'Soulless' or 'something-ess', lol.

Please don't feel you have to spoil the story, cuz I'm sure it will all make sense 3nodding
I think I'll start posting the rest I have written on here. I Have 19 chapter!! razz

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