Jacob and Bella -Twilight-

[1 like no other]

Grim Inari

Even though I don't like Twilight, I'd say this was a good post. You are very articulate as a writer and have brevity. You should make original works of your own.

Thank you. Seeing as I want to be at least a part time writer that means a lot. I know I have a lot of work to do though.
I have written stories but I only actually wrote an entire piece once and the ending wasn't very satisfying I don't think. The few people who have read it said that they liked it but it seems lacking to me.

[The Name is Jazzeh]

Nicely done.

I would love to do this in a roleplay with you, if you are interested.

[NatFantasy]

really love this fanfiction :] you make bella a real character that i could grow to love haha XD Stephanie meyer makes her sound like a dull old droid... (no offence to any twilight fans) Why couldnt you just write all the twilight books biggrin xp Anyway AWESOME fanfiction XD keep doing what you're doing, its great!

[1 like no other]

Aww xd You guys are to cool.

P.S. Go team Jacob!

[1 like no other]

"I did promise didn't I?" Jacob says teasingly to me as he tosses a bag into the back of his car and opens the passenger door for me. I fight off a smile by pursing my lips but I know he can see it in my eyes and the smile touches the edges of my mouth. "You think I'll chicken out" I say as I get in. I cross my arms over my chest and shake my head. "Well I won't. I want to do it" I say. He walks around to the driver's side and seems like he gets there in no time with his long strides. He's still growing oddly. I had first wanted to jump off of the cliff because it looked so daring and ridiculous that Edward would have to speak to me. His voice had become a very rare thing, just reminding me that he existed. The challenge in Jacob's voice on the phone was what made me come today though. Boyfriend or not I wouldn't let him think I was just going to fold without a fight.

[sailor0taku]

hmmmmm i liked it....lol im surprised to since im all for edward and bella♥
-maybeh one day i can find my edward:]

[sailor0taku]

i disagree with you natfantasy, i like bella i can relate to her...she's plain like most girls.... i like that she's not a super popular girl. well jacob is a good friend to her and stuff but i still think that bella belongs to edward<3
-maybeh eon day i can find my edward:]

[xXJaKeS_ReNeSmEeXx]

awesome.. like always..

[ittybittykitty101]

That was cute but... there should be more of a thing between them 4laugh [e-mail]

[HarmonytheKHgirl]

Jacob and Bella forever!! TEAM JACOB EVERYBODY!

[NatFantasy]

Thats your opinion and thats all goood =] but theres no reason for bella to love edward, just that he is hansome, strong, big vampire ect... vain reasons. At least with jacobXbella couple, bella has an actual reason to love jacob. I mean they are best friends! Not turning this into some kind of flame or anything though, we all have our opinions and i respect that fully!

[Meikozzz]

Yes!! I love BellaXJacob! XDDD

[Nacht-Ritter]

1 like no other

What Could Have Happened

I turn towards Jacob after taking off my seat belt. His gaze caught mine and my heart swelled slightly. My hand slid into his slowly and he pulled me closer with his other arm. Like always he seemed to be able to read my mind. He lifted our hands and brushed the back of his fingers across my cheek. At the hot touch my cheeks grew red slightly. "Jacob..." I whispered softly. "Bella..." he whispered back with a light smile. He leaned his head down and his lips pressed down against mine. My free hand lifted up to his cheek as my head tilted back and my lips pressed back against his. As our lips meshed together and my heart started to beat faster I could feel that possibly I could be with Jacob. He had healed me through this far.

You b*****d!

You made Poor Yotsuba-chan cry through you're suckishness, your blatant self insertion, your ignoring the rules of dialogue.

Please, for humanity, die in a fire.