@Berto:
I took a look at your fanfic, the second story to Vence’s Journey. I was mainly was just skimming through some of the chapters, but I liked it that you made the series darker then what it usually is, like with the red light district part and the teen prostitutes (I felt so sorry for them, doing that thing at such young ages. But...s**t just happens in life, you know?). But yeah, I still liked it that you gave Pokemon a darker side. Because, well, a world where there isn’t much dark things going on like with drugs and prostitution is a bit WTF. Okay, I know that Pokemon is meant to be a kids’ show, but realistically it’s still pretty WTF...I’m probably not making much sense, so just ignore that part xD;;
I also liked it that you made the Pokemon be able to hurt the humans with their attacks, and I mean really hurt them. Again, that’s another realistic check right there xD