Didn't You Notice? {Yu Yu Hakusho Fanfic} Update: Chapter 9!

Who's your favorite Reikai Tentai?

Hiei	30.8%	[ 210 ]
Kurama	45.4%	[ 309 ]
Yusuke	15.4%	[ 105 ]
Kuwabara	8.4%	[ 57 ]
Total Votes:			[ 681 ]

[Moon_Flower--Chikita_Yuki]

MidnightRising

WOW does it take a long time to create a Gaia account...

Alright, here's the REAL (actually, the "much more detailed" wink reason that she hasn't posted the next chapter:

A while back, she sent me all of what she had typed up, and I commented that she could do better on the intro. But, to fix the intro, she had to delete about 3/4s of it, and is currently rewriting it. It's taking her a while to rewrite it because neither of us knew how exactly to make it better (before I continue, I want to make it perfectly clear that I do not help her write the stories in any way, shape, or form. K? k.) So there was a bit of a problem with that. Also, I've been rather selfish. I've been forcing her to write responses to our roleplay rather than working on the chapter. She's too good of a writer for me to let go!

*Deep breath*

For those of you who didn't want to read that really long explanation, here it is shortened:

Blame me, not her.

4laugh I don't blame either of you. ^.^ We're entertaining ourselves at any rate. ^.^
~Scooter~

[Rin-lonely_child]

Ignore him! He is NOT to blame!

Mou, tomodachi, how many times must I convince you!?

[Moon_Flower--Chikita_Yuki]

Rin-lonely_child

Ignore him! He is NOT to blame!

Mou, tomodachi, how many times must I convince you!?

4laugh I dont' blame either of you. Blaming you won't make you update faster will it? rofl
~Scooter~

[MidnightRising]

Rin-lonely_child

Ignore him! He is NOT to blame!

Mou, tomodachi, how many times must I convince you!?

Uhh. I don't think you'll ever manage to do that, tomodachi. Seeing as it IS my fault, Rin! (it's going to be hard getting used to calling you that >< wink

[Rin-lonely_child]

MidnightRising

Rin-lonely_child

Ignore him! He is NOT to blame!

Mou, tomodachi, how many times must I convince you!?

Uhh. I don't think you'll ever manage to do that, tomodachi. Seeing as it IS my fault, Rin! (it's going to be hard getting used to calling you that >< wink

sweatdrop Sorry. I ish Rin-chan here. 4laugh

But it is NOT your fault!

[MidnightRising]

Rin-lonely_child

MidnightRising

Rin-lonely_child

Ignore him! He is NOT to blame!

Mou, tomodachi, how many times must I convince you!?

Uhh. I don't think you'll ever manage to do that, tomodachi. Seeing as it IS my fault, Rin! (it's going to be hard getting used to calling you that >< wink

sweatdrop Sorry. I ish Rin-chan here. 4laugh

But it is NOT your fault!

It totally is. I'm sorry, but you're too good of a writer for me to just let go >_<

((OH! And for anyone who wanted to know, her REAL name is- *gets shot*))

[Rin-lonely_child]

*raises hands defensively* It was Yusuke, I swear!

[MidnightRising]

*whispers out with final breath* Yeah right.

[Rin-lonely_child]

*drags Yusuke out from behind a corner while Botan appears and saves Midnight* No, it was! Yusuke, admit that you shot him.

Yusuke: *begins to speak but is cut off*

And that I did not tell you to!

Yusuke: "Uh, sure thing boss. Whatever you say..."

[Moon_Flower--Chikita_Yuki]

*watches with an amused look on her face*

~Scooter~

[Miyu~the-spirit-summoner]

Moon_Flower--Chikita_Yuki

*watches with an amused look on her face*

~Scooter~

HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! rofl

Ahem...
Sry.
*inhale* IT'S NOT ANYONE'S FAULT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sry about that, too...

[MidnightRising]

*jumps up* Ha ha! *removes shirt to reveal a black vest* Kevlar- wondrous thing, ain't it? *pokes Yusuke* Did you just call her "boss"? Rin! What did you do to Yusuke for (Him?Her?) to call you boss??

[amyreed]

I love reading the banter that goes on in between chapters, it's almost as entertaining as the story itself, so take your time. blaugh

[Miyu~the-spirit-summoner]

MidnightRising

*jumps up* Ha ha! *removes shirt to reveal a black vest* Kevlar- wondrous thing, ain't it? *pokes Yusuke* Did you just call her "boss"? Rin! What did you do to Yusuke for (Him?Her?) to call you boss??

Yeah...????? neutral

[Rin-lonely_child]

Botan: *stands back with a confused expression on her face, silently mouthing the word "Kevlar?" to Rin.*

Rin: *shakes her head and waves her hand in a "Later." motion, turning her attention now to Yusuke (*coughGUYcough*)* "I did nothing to him. Ask him yourself." stare

Yusuke: *glares at Midnight for poking him and then glances fearfully at Rin before whispering hurriedly to him.* "Yeah! Trust me, you'd do the same if you were in my position- have you been reading this story? You see what she did to Kurama? That's not gonna be me!"