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Starisia the Shadow Demon
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Starisia the Shadow Demon
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Starisia the Shadow Demon
True, and she liked the first chapter so that's something. Now to just do the secondchapter... after i finish the new chapter for my Vampire Kanda one... and Incubus Kanda... and Mute Allen................. WHAT THE HELL HAVE I DONE!?!?!?!?!
lol you have made Allen one saught after Moyashi if Kanda's after him even if he's a Vampire, and Incubus and if Allen's Mute XD
YAY FOR YOU! Did she critique(sp?) it? or did she just let you have your fun with it?
Considering the fact that the incubus thing is non-con and he's pretty much fate's plaything in the Vampire one-not to mention MUTE, i don't think that's a good thing for him.
Well she's sort of beta reading the chapters as i finish them so i can get her approval on them, mainly to get their emotions and thoughts down. The first chapter is only the preface where their fathers are making the treaty.
non-con huh? I think that fits them pretty well actually XD
Well that's something at least, sounds like you're doing a good job so far!
Oh?
Yeah, I guess. YAY! I finally updated my vampire one and my readers are no longer threatining my life!
Oh I know that feeling XD but it still makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside just because they took the time to yell at me lol
yeah, I mean really if you think about it, if the character's stay completely IC and you're just screwing witht the plot then I'm pretty sure that if Kanda and/or Allen had feelings for the other it's lead to non-con ... until they both realized that they liked it then it'd lead to a normal relationship but all hell would still break loose XD
at least that's how I see it playing out anyway ... of course, I don't think I'd be able to write that XD
Yeah, but it was still scary. I got quite a few death threats...
Yeah, I guess i can see that, although in Darkest Desire it's more Kanda lusting after Allen and deciding he wants him so... yeah...
Unfortunately I can. I'm a little TOO good at writing graphic scenes... I have one friend who is a total yaoi fangirll and wries more than her share of graphic, I've only written 2 and she's saying I'm better at it then her. I'm tempted to bash my head against the fireplace right now......