19 years later

[Dansbabygrl]

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Ch. One Potter House

“Lily, your brothers will be home at Christmas,” said Ginny to her little red head daughter who was complaining about not being with them at Hogwarts or at home. “Lily, dear, you’ll be going soon enough,” Harry said, picking up his daughter and walking to his wife, Ginny. “Mum, I wanna go now!” Lily complained. Ginny shrugged. “Lily, I’m sorry. Two more years then you can,” Ginny told her daughter, and then went back to Kings cross, followed by Harry with Lily. Ron, Hermione with their son followed. “Ron, why did you tell Rose we would disinherit her if she wasn’t in Gryffindor?!” Hermione exclaimed, looking at her husband. “I didn’t mean it, honey. Really. I didn’t. Sorry,” Ron said, leaned down and kissed Hermione, their son ewwing. Lily giggled as she watched her aunt and uncle kiss. “Ok Lil, time to go home. We’ll see Aunt Hermione and Uncle Ron later today. Let’s go dear,” Lily’s mom said, taking her daughter from her husband.

Later that day, Ron, Hermione and Hugo came over for dinner. Lily and Hugo played a little after dinner while the adults talked. Harry’s wand was lying around away from him. Lily saw it, picked it up, and started waving it around. She didn’t know something would happen when she did this, but something did. Lily gasped. A loud crash erupted where Lily and Hugo were. Harry and Ginny both looked up at the ceiling where the noise came from. “Lily?! Hugo!? You two alright!?” Ginny yelled, but got up anyway with Harry and went upstairs. “What happened?!” Ginny exclaimed, reaching Lily’s room. “I was playing with daddy’s wand,” Lily said quietly, looking down.

Harry got to his daughter’s room and got really pissed at what he was seeing. “Lily! Didn’t I tell you not to mess with my wand!?” Harry said, angrily, looking down at his red headed daughter. Lily looked up slowly at her father and nodded. “Why did you mess with it!?” Harry asked, still angry. Lily shook her head, not knowing why. Lily’s eyes started watering and Ginny picked her up. “Harry, she’s still just little. Less yelling at her. I don’t think she meant to mess with your wand. Here, take your wand, go back down to Ron and Hermione and I’ll clean this up. Ok?” Ginny said walking to Harry, handing him his wand and kissing him.

Once Harry was back down to his two best friends, Ron looked at Harry questionably. Harry shook his head. “Don’t ask Ron. I don’t want to talk about it.” Ron nodded and turned to the TV. Half hour later, Hermione went to the stairs and yelled for her son.

[audreyreiko]

The epilogue is stupid, period.

[Dansbabygrl]

Ch. Two At Hogwarts

Rose, Albus, and James all sat in a car on the train until James’ friends came and made him sit with them. That left Rose with her cousin Albus. Once at the stop, the first years went to the boats to take to Hogwarts. During the sorting ceremony, James was murmuring to his friends saying, “I bet my brother Albus will be in Slytherin. What do you think?” A beautiful girl named Renee, who James had a crush on, looked at James and said softly, “Do you not like your brother? Because it seems like it when you say he’ll be in Slytherin. Do you not want him in the same house as you?” James looked over at Renee blushing, “I love my brother! Just he is named after two headmasters. One was in Slytherin. I want him in Gryffindor though,” James said, still red. Renee smiled at James and turned back to the sorting ceremony. “Albus Potter!” called Professor McGonagall. Albus walked slowly to the sorting hat stool and sat down. The sorting hat took a while to sort Albus. “Not Slytherin. Not Slytherin,” Albus was mumbling. After a few minutes, the sorting hat called out, “Gryffindor!” Albus opened his eyes, smiled, and joined his brother at the Gryffindor table.

Rose Weasley was also sorted into Gryffindor. “James! I told you I wouldn’t go into Slytherin!” Albus whispered to his brother, sitting by Renee. Rose sat next to Albus. After dinner, everyone went to their common rooms. Renee went up to James, “James, can we talk?” she asked smiling. James turning red nodded and walked off with her.

Once away from everyone, Renee turned to face James, starting to turn red. “James,” she said softly, “I really like you. Will you go out with me?” James couldn’t speak. So he responded her instead of with a yes but a kiss. Renee kissed back. Albus came walking in. “Oops! OMG! James! What’s mum and dad gonna say when they find out you’ve been snogging a girl!?” Albus exclaimed, looking at his older brother.

James looked at his brother after stopping the kiss with Renee. “Albus! Go away! Let Renee and I be alone! Go find Rose and hang with her! Mum and dad won’t mind if I have a girlfriend! Leave!” James yelled angrily at his younger brother. Albus looked down really upset. Renee felt bad but agreed with her boyfriend that they wanted to be alone. “Albus, I’m sorry but we want to be alone. You can hang with us tomorrow,” Renee said. Albus smiled and left.

“Hun, you aren’t serious are you?” James said, turning to Renee. Renee shook her head. “No dear.” Renee kissed James again who kissed back. Renee’s older sister, Isabelle, Gryffindor Prefect, came in on them and started yelling at her sister. Then Isabelle said it was time for bed and to go up to their dorms cause classes start tomorrow. In the morning, Renee and James walked down to the Great Hall holding hands. They sat down next to each other then looked at their schedules hoping they would be in same classes all the time. They were disappointed when they didn’t have Potions together. They didn’t have Defense Against The Dark Arts together either. They had all the other classes together which made them happy. The mail came. Renee, James, and Albus all had mail. Albus was excited to receive mail from home.

Dear Albus,
Congrats on making Gryffindor!
James sent us an owl after dinner last night. We’re so proud of you dear! Have Fun!
Love,
Mum, Dad, and sister Lily

James watched his brother read his letter over a couple of times before smiling. James went over to his brother and asked, “Albus, can I read what Mum and Dad said? I’m sorry about last night. Please forgive your older brother.” Albus looked up at his brother then smiled. “Sure you can read my letter. Yes I forgive you, James,” Albus said.

James smiled and picked up the letter. He took it back to his seat next to his girlfriend Renee. They both read it silently. After Renee finished, she looked at James and said softly, “I didn’t know you had a sister. How old is she?” James looked up and said, “She’s nine. Really disappointed she’s not here. Mum and Dad say two more years though. She complains still. Lily is little small for her age. I’ll show you a picture of her when we get back to the Common Room. If you want, we can go now. Do you?” Renee smiled and nodded.

[bella1314]

your epiloge needs some mager help

[Hpotterfreak777]

Hello! Bump!

[X_Soulja_Boy_X]

thats great just like the book

[EllyxXxAnna]

I think you are a very good writer!!!!! in fact you could wright a novel of your own some day, And i would read it!!!!the only thing I think you could chang is how much you discribe things, if you tell them a littel bit of the charectors and a little bit of there actions then you give the reader more time to use there imadgination! It is always nice to see things your own way!

P.S. don't listen to that good for nothing girl, I think you have alot of talent!!! Infact I think I will subscribe! Good Work!!! razz

[Dansbabygrl]

James got up, helped Renee up and they went off to Gryffindor Tower, holding hands. Albus watched his brother walk off down the Great Hall, hand-in-hand with his girlfriend. I wish I had a girlfriend, Albus thought to himself. Rose sat down next to Albus. “Hey Rosie. Here’s your schedule. We have all classes together! *smiles* Did you get any mail today?” Albus said, turning to his cousin handing her the school schedule of her classes. “No I didn’t get any mail. Why, did you?” Rose asked, taking her schedule and looking at it. Albus nodded, watching his cousin. “yes I did get mail. Shoot! James took the letter with him!” Albus said, frowning. Rose looked at her cousin.

“We can go get it from him. That’s if you want to. Do you?” Rose asked. Albus thought about it then nodded. Rose and Albus got up and walked to Gryffindor Tower. Rose was the first to walk into the Common Room. She stopped dead at the entrance of the Common Room. Standing in the middle, were James and Renee kissing, tongues in each others mouths. Albus bumped into Rose who had stopped. Albus gasped a little too loudly.

James and Renee broke apart. “Albus! Rosie! WTF!? Go away! No, Renee, we’ll go to my dorm instead. Albus, if you dare mention this to Mum and Dad, I’ll hex you!” James said, and led Renee to his dorm. Rose walked into the Common Room followed by Albus. “I can’t believe this is happening! What will Mum and Dad say? I can’t tell them thought or I’ll get hexed. What do I do Rosie?” Albus asked, looking at his cousin who was looking into the fire thinking. Rose looked up and said, “Tell your parents anyway. Tell them everything. Say James has a girlfriend and you’ve caught them making out but you’ll be hexed if James finds out you told them.” Albus nods and gets out paper and quill to write the letter.

After the letter was written, he sealed it and sent it off with his Snowy Owl. Isabelle came in. “I’m looking for my sister. Anyone know where she is? Albus? Rose?” she asks, turning to the cousins. Albus opened his mouth but closed it when Rose stomped on his foot. “She was with my brother but not anymore. She probably went to bed. Rose and I just got here. Oops. I mean probably went to class already. Rose and I are going to be late for McGonagall!” Albus said, rushing out of the portrait hole with his things followed by his cousin.

“You are a good liar, cousin!” Rose whispered as they reached transfiguration. Albus smiled a “thanks” Rose and Albus made it in time for class to start with them. They sat next to each other in class. Behind them, Draco Malfoy’s son sat. Rose turned and said hi. Malfoy half smiled but didn’t say anything. Rose thought he was probably shy. When class started, Malfoy started doing things to Rose.

[Lust The Sexy Lette]

I really like it keep writeing

[cuteangel97]

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[T3h Black Sharpie]

Hope your happy at least.It's a great story so far....I'd be happy to make a forum about it.And I'd like to be the illustrator.May I please?PM me the answer.

[Ridgebackruler212]

You're a really good writer. I like what you've been adding to the stry. JK just left us hanging at the end of the book so good job.

[bella1314]

I like your writing u should keep going

[Kupo ninja]

You are right it reads like the books; Like bad fanfiction as JK Rowling intended it to be.

[Dansbabygrl]

“Professor, Malfoy won’t stop doing things to me!” Rose complained, when they were all quiet doing work. McGonagall, who was in her cat form, transformed back to herself and walked to Malfoy. “Malfoy, if you do not stop harassing Ms. Weasley, I’m going to have to take points from Slytherin. I’d give you a detention too. You are your father’s son,” she said. Malfoy stopped. After class, Malfoy walked up to Rose. “Sorry, Weasley. I don’t want to be like my father and have enemies in other houses. I was doing it because-“he stopped. “because?” Rose repeated, looking at Malfoy. “Because I like you,” he muttered, looking down. Rose blinked, hoping she was imagining what she just heard. “You-You-like me?” she repeated. Malfoy nodded. Rose didn’t know what to say or do. She looked at her cousin who shrugged. Rose lifted Malfoy’s chin to look into his eyes. Without thinking, Rose was kissing Malfoy. Albus was standing there, wide eyed. He sighed and walked off to his next class by himself.

In the Defense Against the Dark Arts, James and Renee were sitting bye each other, passing notes. When class started, they stopped, sat during class, hand-in-hand. When class was over, James and Renee went back to the Common Room since they had no class next.