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I liked the vibe, nice rhythm and how it's introduced. the second introduced synth sounds weird and out of place. It's too bloopy and loud; try a different synth that fits.


You mean the organ?
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death grips released stems for nldw so I did a Bad Thing

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Hi folks, this is Night Driver

I would like to know your feelings about that.

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I liked where the GCN one started, but it seems kind of empty. What I mean by that is that there isn't anything else there filling the background. Maybe a pad or string could help. But it is humorous because one, you used the GameCube start up sound, and then for the typical "Hey" you hear in some trap songs, you used Mario instead.

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Hi folks, this is Night Driver

I would like to know your feelings about that.

Cheers,
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It sounds like something that stepped out of the late 90s. For that, I'd have to say I actually enjoyed it. I would have sidechained the bassline. That's just me, though.
I agree, some of the sounds are pretty '90s.
Thanks for the tip of the bassline, I will give it a try.

Cheers,
DP75
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https://soundcloud.com/asphyxzero/dvn

I'm slowly getting into IDM and glitch music and this is so exciting because I've wanted to make good IDM for a while.

A bit of a freestyle thing I did on Monday.
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https://soundcloud.com/asphyxzero/dvn

I'm slowly getting into IDM and glitch music and this is so exciting because I've wanted to make good IDM for a while.

A bit of a freestyle thing I did on Monday.


This is really pleasing to the ears. Sounds granular.
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Alukarj
I liked where the GCN one started, but it seems kind of empty. What I mean by that is that there isn't anything else there filling the background. Maybe a pad or string could help. But it is humorous because one, you used the GameCube start up sound, and then for the typical "Hey" you hear in some trap songs, you used Mario instead.

A friend of mine is supposed to record lyrics for it eventually, that's why there isn't much going on. Thanks a lot for the feedback.
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https://soundcloud.com/asphyxzero/dvn

I'm slowly getting into IDM and glitch music and this is so exciting because I've wanted to make good IDM for a while.

A bit of a freestyle thing I did on Monday.


alukarj is right, supppahhh granular. Very nice mixing too (for all I can tell; listening on laptops but at least I know the mids/highs sound clean!)

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