F.73| Official Constructive Criticism Thread | MOD APPROVED

[Wrath of Karma]

Evolsine

Evolsine

Layra-chan

Evolsine

Layra-chan

Evolsine

Phrenom?

Kick is kind of...too large? It's low and empty and sits a bit too much under the bassline. I don't know; I can hear it fine, but it sounds weird. Maybe I'm just too used to fuller music.

Fuller? You want me to throw it in higher in the mix?

Well, I just meant that I'm used to more sonic density.

As for the kick, I guess what I'm looking for is more low mid...? Like more of a bass drum than a pure kick. You've got some click and a nice reverby tail off, but some bass/low-mid body would be good to make it a bit heavier.

I put it through an EQ/Vocoder and removed too much then. I'll retry.

// Phrenom

UPDATEEEEEEEEEEE

Will release through "Catharsis Records"

Hah, War of the Worlds! Nice touch.

[Evolsine]

Koumaru

Evolsine

Evolsine

Layra-chan

Evolsine

Fuller? You want me to throw it in higher in the mix?

Well, I just meant that I'm used to more sonic density.

As for the kick, I guess what I'm looking for is more low mid...? Like more of a bass drum than a pure kick. You've got some click and a nice reverby tail off, but some bass/low-mid body would be good to make it a bit heavier.

I put it through an EQ/Vocoder and removed too much then. I'll retry.

// Phrenom

UPDATEEEEEEEEEEE

Will release through "Catharsis Records"

Hah, War of the Worlds! Nice touch.

NEW UPDATE!!!

[Reticence]

Layra-chan

Evolsine

Unseamed

Good to see you're all still churning them out.

Your if the balls don't touch song was the best thing to humor me on f.73

"If the balls don't touch then it's not gay..."

Oh man that was such a wonderful track.

And to think I had just successfully pushed it from my memory.

[Wrath of Karma]

GUESS WHAT I RE-UPLOADED LOL

[White Linen]

Evolsine

Koumaru

Evolsine

Evolsine

Layra-chan

Evolsine

Fuller? You want me to throw it in higher in the mix?

Well, I just meant that I'm used to more sonic density.

As for the kick, I guess what I'm looking for is more low mid...? Like more of a bass drum than a pure kick. You've got some click and a nice reverby tail off, but some bass/low-mid body would be good to make it a bit heavier.

I put it through an EQ/Vocoder and removed too much then. I'll retry.

// Phrenom

UPDATEEEEEEEEEEE

Will release through "Catharsis Records"

Hah, War of the Worlds! Nice touch.

NEW UPDATE!!!

Nice! I dig DAWG! xd
But seriously good job.

[Layra-chan]

Koumaru

GUESS WHAT I RE-UPLOADED LOL

I'm still of the opinion that the entire first half of the track can be gotten rid of.

[Wrath of Karma]

Layra-chan

Koumaru

GUESS WHAT I RE-UPLOADED LOL

I'm still of the opinion that the entire first half of the track can be gotten rid of.

A Condensed Remix (lol?) could be in the works, and probably better produced. razz

[Evolsine]

White Linen

Evolsine

Koumaru

Evolsine

Evolsine

I put it through an EQ/Vocoder and removed too much then. I'll retry.

// Phrenom

UPDATEEEEEEEEEEE

Will release through "Catharsis Records"

Hah, War of the Worlds! Nice touch.

NEW UPDATE!!!

Nice! I dig DAWG! xd
But seriously good job.

Cheers smile

[White Linen]

Layra-chan

Koumaru

GUESS WHAT I RE-UPLOADED LOL

I'm still of the opinion that the entire first half of the track can be gotten rid of.

It's a psy track......... stare
PS: Koumaru, I still hate you for being that good. gonk

[Layra-chan]

White Linen

Layra-chan

Koumaru

GUESS WHAT I RE-UPLOADED LOL

I'm still of the opinion that the entire first half of the track can be gotten rid of.

It's a psy track......... stare
PS: Koumaru, I still hate you for being that good. gonk

The first half sounds too much like Nebula. Which is not a bad thing at all, but it's not quite relevant to the second half of the track at all.

[Evolsine]

Layra-chan

White Linen

Layra-chan

Koumaru

GUESS WHAT I RE-UPLOADED LOL

I'm still of the opinion that the entire first half of the track can be gotten rid of.

It's a psy track......... stare
PS: Koumaru, I still hate you for being that good. gonk

The first half sounds too much like Nebula. Which is not a bad thing at all, but it's not quite relevant to the second half of the track at all.

I like it but I would redo the final mixdown again. Gets muddy at times!

(Not to say m songs don't, just know it from experience)

[Evolsine]

Started a new one. Render volume seems really low. Dunno why.

Influx (W/ Crime and Punishment Sample)

[Wrath of Karma]

Evolsine

Layra-chan

White Linen

Layra-chan

Koumaru

GUESS WHAT I RE-UPLOADED LOL

I'm still of the opinion that the entire first half of the track can be gotten rid of.

It's a psy track......... stare
PS: Koumaru, I still hate you for being that good. gonk

The first half sounds too much like Nebula. Which is not a bad thing at all, but it's not quite relevant to the second half of the track at all.

I like it but I would redo the final mixdown again. Gets muddy at times!

(Not to say m songs don't, just know it from experience)

I agree that the track's mixing is sorta muddy. I can touch it up now that I can actually do more with my tunes.

[Evolsine]

Evolsine

Started a new one. Render volume seems really low. Dunno why.

Influx (W/ Crime and Punishment Sample)

Update.

[Digital Malevolence]

I wouldn't mind opinions on this track I made not too long ago.
Though, I still haven't recorded vocals yet.

http://www.mediafire.com/?455a2qhwwqb9p5w