Captain Coldwave
Most of my WIP's are still in text inside my notebook.. but I've decided to make a song that actually fits well in this forum... here goes:
4/4 time 2 kicks a beat with a snare on each 2nd with a sample of Robin Williams: "One Ugly PandaBitch" per measure for 2 or 3 measures with the following measure or 2 with just "One Ugly b***h". The RW samples will alternate on and off and certain parts of the song, say, off for the first x measures, on for the next y as a sort of buildup to something more.
I've decided to take most, if not all of my music samples from one compilation: The Cyberflesh conspiracy.
So during the part with the RW samples, I will have the first part of the riff from Stabbing Westward's early version of "Violent Mood Swings" and during "One Ugly b***h" the second part of the riff will run.
There will also be some deep wah'd synth bass line... I think I just whipped together a shitty presetcore of it in beatcraft.
So...BRB Soundclouding!
Also keep in mind this is my first actual attempt at EDM... and I did it in like 10 minutes... however, serious criticism would be much appreciated now so I can get it better sooner!
yeah... I just felt like fitting in here. But I will make this song!
The kick and the snare are both overcompressed.
The parts with just the kick are boring and slightly painful to listen to because of how badly the kick is overcompressed.
Even though there's no other context, it feels like it's too fast. Don't know why.
At about 0:28 you introduce a bunch of other percussion pieces, and I don't think any of them work. The toms might be good if they weren't just a downward tom roll, and then there's that bassy thing that sounds like my ears are popping; I think it's a mud problem from generating subbass that really shouldn't be there. The cymbals are too loud, and there's a clacky, bamboo-type sound that just feels random and out of place. Oh, and it's either overcompressed or peaking or something like that.
Overall it's boring and painful. It's boring because nothing happens and there's nothing but minimal percussion, and it's painful because it's overcompressed.
Tracks like this are the reason we tell people not to post anything until they've made a hundred tracks. Sure, you're starting out, you're expected to suck terribly and everyone hates your crap, but at the moment there is nothing I can tell you that will actually help, other than "don't do that, don't do that, don't do that," in which case I might as well tell you to either start over completely and pretend this track never happened. Which I think I will, come to think of it.