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- Posted: Fri, 29 Oct 2010 02:31:08 +0000
Your off-beat snare sounds really weird, as in off-beat snares are really weird. It makes the percussion sound too fast.
The other main problem is how minimal your track is. You have 3-part percussion (kick, clap, snare) and the pad chords, and that's it. The four (four?) chords you keep repeating get boring since they don't change at all, and there's nothing else to the track. If you're making house, maybe you should think about adding a bassline, and some shuffle-y bits to the percussion.
Also, you might want to visit the Basic Production Guide, where Evol and I describe (vaguely) the basic things to consider when producing music.