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Post: 62973389_1516 created on Sat, 05 May 2012 00:08:08 +0000
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I really don't know what I'm doing....

You posted the link as an image dude ?_?

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Post: 62973389_1517 created on Sat, 05 May 2012 23:21:01 +0000
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I really don't know what I'm doing....

You posted the link as an image dude ?_?

http://soundcloud.com/sauvagemusic/welp

I did?

Welp...

hahah what a ******** tard

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Post: 62973389_1518 created on Sat, 05 May 2012 23:43:48 +0000
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Offizier Wolfgang

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Post: 62973389_1519 created on Sat, 05 May 2012 23:55:50 +0000
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Post: 62973389_1520 created on Sun, 06 May 2012 21:26:56 +0000
Posted: Sun, 06 May 2012 21:26:56 +0000

Welp, I need help on making my Dubstep better, this was made in FL with Massive of course, not mastered and still under works, help me fix the s**t outta it?

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Post: 62973389_1521 created on Tue, 08 May 2012 06:11:34 +0000
Posted: Tue, 08 May 2012 06:11:34 +0000

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Welp, I need help on making my Dubstep better, this was made in FL with Massive of course, not mastered and still under works, help me fix the s**t outta it?

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I would like to suggest trying to make what sounds like it should be a bassline, an octave or two lower when it comes to the dubstep sound. It also sounds too loud. The kick drum is being drowned out, and I'm hearing this with my headphones on.

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Post: 62973389_1522 created on Tue, 08 May 2012 06:23:23 +0000
Posted: Tue, 08 May 2012 06:23:23 +0000

Make the bassline softer, bring the sub up a bit more. Also you need to cut some holes, either volume or filter, in the sub and bass for the kick drum to poke through. It wouldn't hurt to add a bit more click/beater noise to the kick drum, maybe by layering in a hi-hat.

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Post: 62973389_1523 created on Tue, 08 May 2012 06:28:34 +0000
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I really don't know what I'm doing....

You posted the link as an image dude ?_?

http://soundcloud.com/sauvagemusic/welp

I did?

Welp...

hahah what a ******** tard

Maybe raise the highs on the percussion, especially when the synth comes in. I'd also suggest tightening the kick a bit, not so much release.
The section from 0:31 to 1:01 is kind of long; maybe cut it in half.

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Post: 62973389_1524 created on Tue, 08 May 2012 06:32:17 +0000
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Offizier Wolfgang

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Chamber Trio Op. 3 No. 1 (U.V. Wolfgang) (WIP)

The kick kind of gets eaten by the low strings. Given the steadiness of the low strings, maybe you should try something other than a 4ttf beat, or at least more variance in the drumming.

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Post: 62973389_1525 created on Tue, 08 May 2012 06:37:24 +0000
Posted: Tue, 08 May 2012 06:37:24 +0000

Evolsine

http://soundcloud.com/evolsine/spanish-onion

The piano and the pad thing are a bit loud. Also the main synth sounds a bit too detuny to hold chords well.
Also the sub jumps in volume depending on pitch.
I like the panning on the hats, but you could actually afford to have them drift from side to side more.

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Post: 62973389_1526 created on Tue, 08 May 2012 06:47:56 +0000
Posted: Tue, 08 May 2012 06:47:56 +0000

Evolsine

http://soundcloud.com/evolsine/high-as-funk-phones

For some reason the only thing that really gets me is the piano melody, which sounds a bit off possibly because there isn't much emphasis on the first note of the phrase. Making that one note a little bit louder and harder would do a lot for that section.

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Post: 62973389_1527 created on Tue, 08 May 2012 06:53:04 +0000
Posted: Tue, 08 May 2012 06:53:04 +0000

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The snare is a little soft or dry or weak or something.

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Post: 62973389_1528 created on Tue, 08 May 2012 17:43:44 +0000
Posted: Tue, 08 May 2012 17:43:44 +0000

Layra-chan

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Evolsine

Where is everyone? gonk

Hiatus. I'm sorry. I really need to just stick with one thing. Ugh!

Chamber Trio Op. 3 No. 1 (U.V. Wolfgang) (WIP)

The kick kind of gets eaten by the low strings. Given the steadiness of the low strings, maybe you should try something other than a 4ttf beat, or at least more variance in the drumming.

Yeah, I find that to be kind of strange myself. I do plan on changing up the rhythm of the drums pattern later on. This all comes from the price of working on headphones. When it comes to the actual mixdown, that's when things should sound a lot better, minus the headphones.