Layra-chan
Ora: The key change at 0:23 is a bit awkward. Also that last vox sample at the end needs a little longer attack on it; there's a tiny pop when it comes back in.
The hats are the main problem with the break: too regular. Shuffle, stutter, syncopate.
Fukushima: Oh man, mixing issues. So much noise in the high end, muddy low end. The kick and the bass do not like each other.
Neutola: I'm almost tempted to suggest you add a bit of trance-gating to one or more of the vox samples.
Ora: Look into key change. You mean the last instance of the chant? I hate the hats. Should do it by hand. Get some glitch going.
Fukushima: I will have to listen through somehow. It sounds good over on my end
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Neutola: I think that is a wonderful idea. I lvoe H.G. Wells btw.
What sound output are you using again? Firewire? Pci? USB? PCI-E? What model? I think you hear much more clearly than I do.
I think I am using substandard chipsets to mix. It sounds great on my powered JVC amp with Klipsche speakers. Maybe my Samsung Sub is at fault for all my bass problems. I need monitors.
Thank you for the honest feedback Laylay
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