I like the male version a lot better than the female, the female dresses are both a little plain looking. I do love the neon green and black pairing, but maybe you could show a little more movement in the design? Exaggerate some elements? Like the fabric folds on the dress design in your first post arent very noticeable, maybe you could make them more obvious by raising the curve of each fold all of the way around? If the folds could be seen at each side it'd make a difference. The poofy skirt and the sort of droopy, elegantish folds don't look very good paired together.. At least not in this way. It's not the sort of clothing or design I really pay attention to or like though, so I could and probably am wrong about that.