okay heres what im gonna say about your first site....one eminem is overrated he isnt that great but oh wellt hats your thing he is brilliant but over rated....ne ways i liked the theme except for the fact that your site is ever mans night mare*cough*f** of the month*cough* but other then that it is a good plays to chat doesnt look like it took muhc time
so for a quicky site its okay id give it a 6 out of 10 for a quicky...
TIPS FOR YOUR SITE.... add forums or a chatterbox just for looks. becuase its a personal page add some kind of curser that blnks or flashes. A BACKROUND would be a nice start. and take your picture of and add it to a "special" section that deals with "all about the editor" if u dont have one make one..its helps
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and your second site....ONE...EITHER USE IT OR DELETE IT..its a waste you dont use it...but ne ways can i call you devilsih hamster
wink lol just kdding so yeah 0 out of 10 for other site but good job on first for a quicky