Dear friend: I have carefully considered your imaginary problem and have come up with an imaginary solution for you.
Your stated issues: storyline and paneling.
Your stated strengths: great designs
You didn't show us your designs, so I'm going to use my telepathic abilities to see them. HMMMMMM~
:/ whish i had scanner and papers with comic
Your implied weakness: you don’t actually have a comic with these problems because you don’t have a comic.
and my story has holes in it
Well there’s your paneling problem! Your story has holes in it.
You say you have a problem with your storyline, but you didn’t tell us what the story was, so I’m going to use my telepathic powers again to figure it out. HMMM~I am sensing that your story is the same story I told to my three-year-old niece on the fly last week.
Your story is about a young dragon named Trashpot, and the problem with your story is that it’s meandering and has no underlying structure. The plot: Trashpot doesn’t enjoy the park because he has no friends to play with, and then he makes a friend named Cinderella because your three-year-old niece really likes princesses. Where’s the tension? Where’s the denouement? Rookie mistakes.