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well guys im a comic guy but i need help with something my designs are great but i forget that i also need to add is legs and my story has holes in it
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...then draw the legs? Or write a story about a guy with no legs because it would be awesome. Or a story about ghosts, genies, and ethereal people, they don't need to have legs either.


Showing your work so far would probably be kind of helpful for saying something more useful.
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:/ whish i had scanner and papers with comic
and im not adding etherial mostly fighting and comedy
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Dear friend: I have carefully considered your imaginary problem and have come up with an imaginary solution for you.

Your stated issues: storyline and paneling.
Your stated strengths: great designs

You didn't show us your designs, so I'm going to use my telepathic abilities to see them. HMMMMMM~

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rage_beast00
:/ whish i had scanner and papers with comic


Your implied weakness: you don’t actually have a comic with these problems because you don’t have a comic.

rage_beast00
and my story has holes in it


Well there’s your paneling problem! Your story has holes in it.

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You say you have a problem with your storyline, but you didn’t tell us what the story was, so I’m going to use my telepathic powers again to figure it out. HMMM~I am sensing that your story is the same story I told to my three-year-old niece on the fly last week.

Your story is about a young dragon named Trashpot, and the problem with your story is that it’s meandering and has no underlying structure. The plot: Trashpot doesn’t enjoy the park because he has no friends to play with, and then he makes a friend named Cinderella because your three-year-old niece really likes princesses. Where’s the tension? Where’s the denouement? Rookie mistakes.

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