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i've been making a webcomic for around 2 years
(go check it: WICKED Reasoning )
i want to improve it, and i would like to hear some feedback if possible biggrin
much appreciated!
mrgreen
Just a little pet peeve of mine: seeing the title (usually a random combination of Adjective Noun) of the comic defined on the site. We know what wicked and reasoning mean, so I'm not sure what purpose the definitions are supposed to serve.

You, on comic #055
i hate when i think of a comic that's way out of my league to do! lots of details and perspective, i'm too unskilled.it takes me a lot more time!


I think this sums up where you can best take this comic in the future. Spend time getting comfortable with things you have a hard time drawing. The more flexible your art becomes, the more your visual vocabulary increases, and the more story you can tell. Don't ever let your art skill hold you back from doing your best storytelling. If you can't draw it now, then learn!

It's definitely a process, for sure. And comics are a great way to practice, so keep it up and keep pushing!
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wow, i have no complaints good seat up great follow ups and awesome punchlines, i really just have a question this may sound really stupid but i'm not technologically inclined like most people. how did you start your web comics?
I have to say I adore the script and punchlines but the art is not very good. I would invest in a tablet and get more experience with art in general. Practice drawing real life people, I know it can be tedious but it is the best practice you can get. I think you could also find an artist willing to draw for you since you clearly have some wonderful ideas right here.
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Oh god, comic 80 made me laugh. That was great.

One thing I would have to say is that most of the comic is centered on one character, which I'm guessing is based off you. The only problem with that for me would be is that you're not exploring possibilities with other characters potential to add to your comic storyline/dialogue. I think your comic would be that much more interesting if you develop other characters and gave them some spotlight in your comic too.

Diversity.
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Oh god, comic 80 made me laugh. That was great.

One thing I would have to say is that most of the comic is centered on one character, which I'm guessing is based off you. The only problem with that for me would be is that you're not exploring possibilities with other characters potential to add to your comic storyline/dialogue. I think your comic would be that much more interesting if you develop other characters and gave them some spotlight in your comic too.

Diversity.


that's great advice! i was thinking of giving more spotlight to other characters actually. still make i based on some real life stuff. thank you!
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I personally think there great, I reall enjoyed reading them smile
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wow, i have no complaints good seat up great follow ups and awesome punchlines, i really just have a question this may sound really stupid but i'm not technologically inclined like most people. how did you start your web comics?


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wow, i have no complaints good seat up great follow ups and awesome punchlines, i really just have a question this may sound really stupid but i'm not technologically inclined like most people. how did you start your web comics?


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thank you cat_xd

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