GlanceLavender
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- Posted: Mon, 06 Sep 2010 05:06:38 +0000
So, I am almost done with my second chapter of my webcomic. I'm looking back on this second chapter and realize that there wasn't really a plot. Everything I did seems pretty essential for the future, but in the short term, it feels like I lost the momentum I had in the first chapter. Now I don't know what to cut our or add in it to make this better.
Basically what happened is that Ch. 1 deals with the incident that sets the characters on their journey. The main character decides to assassinate the king of his country, but this is complicated by his feelings for the princess. The two of them decide to set out together, him trying to keep his resolve to die a savior, and her trying to find another path for them to take.
Ch. 2 deals with the addition of a third character (a knight character who lends much needed contrast and balance to the story) and their crossing the distance needed to continue their journey. This chapter has a lot of important elements like world-building, character development, and establishing character relationships, but the only thing that actually happened was the characters went from point A to point B with some internal conflicts, but little or no external opposition. This chapter has some solid humor and charm to make it worthwhile, but it lacks the tension and drama of the first chapter and third chapter that follow it.
The story may make chronological sense without this second chapter if I just said "They traveled from here to there" quickly. But, if I were to remove the scenes completely like that, there wouldn't be any weight to the major plot points. The reason being, you wouldn't know these characters enough to care what happens to them. They wouldn't have developed relationships amongst each other deep enough for you to buy the risks they take for each other.
So, I'm wondering where the happy medium is, or if maybe there's something new I could add at some point to add the needed tension or drama.
Basically what happened is that Ch. 1 deals with the incident that sets the characters on their journey. The main character decides to assassinate the king of his country, but this is complicated by his feelings for the princess. The two of them decide to set out together, him trying to keep his resolve to die a savior, and her trying to find another path for them to take.
Ch. 2 deals with the addition of a third character (a knight character who lends much needed contrast and balance to the story) and their crossing the distance needed to continue their journey. This chapter has a lot of important elements like world-building, character development, and establishing character relationships, but the only thing that actually happened was the characters went from point A to point B with some internal conflicts, but little or no external opposition. This chapter has some solid humor and charm to make it worthwhile, but it lacks the tension and drama of the first chapter and third chapter that follow it.
The story may make chronological sense without this second chapter if I just said "They traveled from here to there" quickly. But, if I were to remove the scenes completely like that, there wouldn't be any weight to the major plot points. The reason being, you wouldn't know these characters enough to care what happens to them. They wouldn't have developed relationships amongst each other deep enough for you to buy the risks they take for each other.
So, I'm wondering where the happy medium is, or if maybe there's something new I could add at some point to add the needed tension or drama.