The Story of Star and Lune - 13 pages

[Chisein]

Page 10 was by far the best and creative story in the whole lot. I enjoyed the art and the story was original. I think it would be best to scrap the first story and start with that intermission story as your main comic. I think it would make a great children's book if not a comic.

[Ginger23]

Chisein

Page 10 was by far the best and creative story in the whole lot. I enjoyed the art and the story was original. I think it would be best to scrap the first story and start with that intermission story as your main comic. I think it would make a great children's book if not a comic.

Well I dont see how it was relevent to your main story, but I agree it would make for a good children's book.

[utopiansky]

ok, 3 more pages added!

[Bulbasauur]

wh--

how is the main character so much more detailed then the other characters...?

[utopiansky]

time saver.
Speaking of time, I have no more, so this is my last update for nanomango.
Almost got halfway!

[Synyster Slash]

But I wanted to see what happened next! Will you continue it in your free time, or are you ditching it altogether?

[PatchesVonGore]

utopiansky

time saver.
Speaking of time, I have no more, so this is my last update for nanomango.
Almost got halfway!

Oh no! Really? D:

I was really into this. <3
It's so cute.

I really wanted to see what happens when Lune and Star meet up again. >w<
Like when he said, "We'll meet later!" or something to that effect and ran off~

[utopiansky]

I might continue the comic after I'm finished will all my final projects for class. Depends!

[The Egg Man]

Oh god, please continue. I love this idea. So much.

[KomiyanZaibach]

You should totally start to use a better font for your main character, too.

[utopiansky]

KomiyanZaibach

You should totally start to use a better font for your main character, too.

oh oops! I didn't mean to leave it on arial. xp Just realized I never changed it.

[-i-rainb0w-cUpcake-]

Well,I don't know much about comics,but I liked it : D