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This is old. But I like the style.
Should I just make this into a comic? Would anyone want to read it?

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That's... really gross and unfunny.
Maybe that was supposed to be funny, but I just feel disgusted.
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Very....crude. :/

Toilet humor might net you an audience, but the set up is much too wooden that the joke falls flat.
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Maybe that was supposed to be funny, but I just feel disgusted.


I agree...
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Even though I have the sense of humor of an eight year old, I didn't find this funny.
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I laughed more at the comments than the comic.
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Im saying this as a Fan of Manga.

I have to say if your going to make a manga like that youd only attract.... Perverted Sick people

My Opinion

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Art's good... comedy could use some work.
I wasn't particularly disgusted, but the joke definitely could have been handled better. Panels 2&3 don't add anything to the joke, 4 arguably doesn't as well. When you omit those panels, it doesn't transform into good humor, but it does deliver the joke a lot better.

That said, there is an audience for this kind of humor, you're just not likely to find them in this subforum. If doing poop jokes is what you've always wanted, go for it.
Hah, don;t listen to these stuck-up manga kiddies. I thought it was pretty good, my kind of humor. and hey, every one has a different sense of humor, just cus it's a bit ''off-color'' doesn't make it bad.
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Hah, don;t listen to these stuck-up manga kiddies. I thought it was pretty good, my kind of humor. and hey, every one has a different sense of humor, just cus it's a bit ''off-color'' doesn't make it bad.

What makes them stuck-up manga kids?
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We're not a group of seven-year-old boys, so it's no wonder nobody is liking the poop joke. If that's how you writing is, then don't expect your comic to get many readers at all. If you don't have many readers, it doesn't matter what your update schedule is.
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Okay bombed toilet humor aside, here's what I got to say.

1. Why is her ear on the outside (basically in front) of the phone in the second panel? Also how is she holding it up? Her shoulder clearly isn't applying pressure to it.
2. Fourth panel, the phone is no where near an ear.
3. Blondie's (I'm assuming she's blonde or fair-haired) phone bounces from left, to right, then BACK to left. Consistency.


Now, back to the poop humor. No one acts like that when they're making a bowel movement. That's orgasm behaviour, so unless she has some weird fetish for that, this joke is incredibly stupid.

Edit : Oh. No. This probably shouldn't be weekly if it follows this line of humor.
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First of, that is very toilet humour, and most people get past that at the age of 6.

Secondly, who in the world answers the phone while on the toilet?

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