RUN LIL JARED the online comic - updates on fridays

panda or penguin

panda	31.0%	[ 9 ]
penguin	24.1%	[ 7 ]
poll whore	44.8%	[ 13 ]
Total Votes:			[ 29 ]

[mikurosepanda]

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comments and crits are really loved heart

[mikurosepanda]

bump! mrgreen

[Happy Pyro]

so...this is just shameless advertising?

[mikurosepanda]

Happy Pyro

so...this is just shameless advertising?

no, i'm here to get critiques and talk to people about it. my teacher tells me to talk to people more and get used to discussion, so i figured i'd throw out "HERE IS MY COMIC" in hopes that people would talk to me.

it also doubles as advertising, i admit, but that's because i suck at figuring out topics to get people to talk.

[Happy Pyro]

mikurosepanda

Happy Pyro

so...this is just shameless advertising?

no, i'm here to get critiques and talk to people about it. my teacher tells me to talk to people more and get used to discussion, so i figured i'd throw out "HERE IS MY COMIC" in hopes that people would talk to me.

it also doubles as advertising, i admit, but that's because i suck at figuring out topics to get people to talk.

oic. Well, from the first post it sounds as tho you just want people to know about it

[arrogantchild]

Wow, Penguin School is super adorable. gonk

I like what you have so far. From what I've read/What you've posted, this seems like a nice comic for kids to read, or at least I was very into this type of thing when I was young.

!My favorite thing about this is that the actions that the characters make are legible.

[mikurosepanda]

happy piro- yeah i kinda figured that was the first step sweatdrop

arogantchild- oh man, the comic gets weirder. it got majorly toned down from it's original version. (rassy was so unnecessarily violent)

good to know, i would hope things are clear, that's really important. mrgreen

[Baron CatBrush]

Your inking is pretty clean, and your lines seem pretty confident, which is good. The art is decent, but it's hard to tell what is going on a lot of the time. It just doesn't read very well at all.

It's also hard to tell what is going on in the story. From what I can tell, he was going to a penguin school, and the school got blown up, and now he's awakened in some sort of monster school? This is all very non-sequitur.I guess I don't know what the point is. Is the whole thing going to be this sort of random "oh I'm a bear with a knife and I'm dressed as a penguin" sort of joke? It seems like this comic doesn't have anything to say.

I could be wrong, but you've already lost me on the first story.

[mikurosepanda]

CatBrush

Your inking is pretty clean, and your lines seem pretty confident, which is good. The art is decent, but it's hard to tell what is going on a lot of the time.

It's also hard to tell what is going on in the story. From what I can tell, he was going to a penguin school, and the school got blown up, and now he's awakened in some sort of monster school? This is all very non-sequitur.I guess I don't know what the point is. Is the whole thing going to be this sort of random "oh I'm a bear with a knife and I'm dressed as a penguin" sort of joke? It seems like this comic doesn't have anything to say.

I could be wrong, but you've already lost me on the first story.

thank you very much, and yes, that is what happened. there is more to the story coming, so maybe that will aid in the understanding. sweatdrop there is a point.

thank you very much for your crit by the way.much appreciated wink

[mikurosepanda]

sweatdrop bump sweatdrop

[mikurosepanda]

http://www.runliljared.com/greetings3.html updated whee

[mikurosepanda]

bump sweatdrop

[zaMmaP]

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I think it's missing a page. It was like "Boom" then "OMG" then "Join our school" and then randomly jumped to "story of this school"

The first panel of that pages started "WITH PUPPETS" but the page that went before it did not have some sort of lead into that what so ever.

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[mikurosepanda]

zaMmaP

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I think it's missing a page. It was like "Boom" then "OMG" then "Join our school" and then randomly jumped to "story of this school"

The first panel of that pages started "WITH PUPPETS" but the page that went before it did not have some sort of lead into that what so ever.

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oh wow thank you. its fixed now! 3nodding

the link on page 6 went right back to the index instead of the next story. sweatdrop

edit: umm, i looked at that photo you just liked me, i don't get it, was that to poke fun at me? neutral .

[zaMmaP]

mikurosepanda

edit: umm, i looked at that photo you just liked me, i don't get it, was that to poke fun at me? neutral .

???

What photo?

And wow, two pages missing! No wonder everyone was confused.