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it looks good, but sometimes the poses and the angles can be a bit repetitive. also, it would be better if you host it on a site where readers don't have to click back and forth.
I love your style but DA isn't the best place to host a webcomic, it's almost impossible to navigate. You don't want the experience to be a tedious one for the reader, you want them to sit back and get immersed in the story and not get all caught up in the trivial task of locating the next page.

I suggest you put this on Smackjeeves or Tumblr (the latter, using the 'simple web comic theme' ). Not only will it be easier for the reader but you'll be giving your comic better exposure to new readers. Good luck!

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