ok fine i have a manga idea

m&ms or skittles

m&ms	57.1%	[ 12 ]
skittles	42.9%	[ 9 ]
Total Votes:			[ 21 ]

[Not.A.Bomb]

SORY i thougt my last topic was ok here but it was moved so i made this becuz u no i have a idea 2 tell u......its about girl nmaed princes rei and shes from the SUN country and she falls in luv with a solder named toshi from the moon kigdom AND sun and moon r at war so rei tries 2 run away.........wat do u guys think????

[Zee Coldwater]

I think you're too stupid to be anything but a troll.

Or possibly a 10-year-old.

[Pooqa]

is everybody jerks on this freaking forum? ):<
@not.a.bomb. it makes me think of romeo&juliet. Maybe delv deeper into the story and find a deeper meaning for the story over just two people being in love and running away because of war between the kingdoms. (:

there! see? THAT is CONSTRUCTIVE critism. i point out the problem, then give ADVISE for what she should do.
Not just bash the idea completely.

[A BAD CASE OF HERPES]

Pooqa

is everybody jerks on this freaking forum? ):<

Yes.

[Kersian]

Not.A.Bomb

SORY i thougt my last topic was ok here but it was moved so i made this becuz u no i have a idea 2 tell u......its about girl nmaed princes rei and shes from the SUN country and she falls in luv with a solder named toshi from the moon kigdom AND sun and moon r at war so rei tries 2 run away.........wat do u guys think????

Whoo hoo, another "manga" idea

Well I think you need a setting, I mean the sun and moon country, what world is this? You better also show the mood of this story or else to me it seems to happy.
He's a soldier right? And this world is at war. Then have a war theme, violence.

your supporting cast (which you lack) is not introduced, You need a supporting characters, unless you called boy #1 or girl #2

[AEAcomics]

If she's a Sun princess and he's a Moon soldier, and their countries are at war, how on earth do they meet in the first place, let alone develop a relationship?

[Kersian]

DarKlawStudios

If she's a Sun princess and he's a Moon soldier, and their countries are at war, how on earth do they meet in the first place, let alone develop a relationship?

Yeah that is a plot hole.
Maybe the princess decides to fight so she dresses up as a soldier, oh no she fell for the moon soldier while everyones at war.

[blehblehblehffffffffffff]

Pooqa

is everybody jerks on this freaking forum? ):<
@not.a.bomb. it makes me think of romeo&juliet. Maybe delv deeper into the story and find a deeper meaning for the story over just two people being in love and running away because of war between the kingdoms. (:

there! see? THAT is CONSTRUCTIVE critism. i point out the problem, then give ADVISE for what she should do.
Not just bash the idea completely.

My deepest condolences on your inability to tell when you are being trolled.

[KayJKay]

Pooqa

is everybody jerks on this freaking forum? ):<
@not.a.bomb. it makes me think of romeo&juliet. Maybe delv deeper into the story and find a deeper meaning for the story over just two people being in love and running away because of war between the kingdoms. (:

there! see? THAT is CONSTRUCTIVE critism. i point out the problem, then give ADVISE for what she should do.
Not just bash the idea completely.

Not.A.Bomb has been trolling here awhile. Most of us just ignore em.

[blinkanjell01]

Troll. Also, romeo and juliet.

[neku_seiiki]

welll.....it sounds pretty basic. everyone has to start somewhere right? try to work on structuring your story: the setting, supporting characters, well, the plot, and put some wicked antagonists in there. smile

[Sense vs Sensibility]

It sounds like sailor moon.

[-2o]

Pooqa

is everybody jerks on this freaking forum? ):<
@not.a.bomb. it makes me think of romeo&juliet. Maybe delv deeper into the story and find a deeper meaning for the story over just two people being in love and running away because of war between the kingdoms. (:

there! see? THAT is CONSTRUCTIVE critism. i point out the problem, then give ADVISE for what she should do.
Not just bash the idea completely.

You are insufferably annoying. Also,Not.A.bomb is very obviously a troll. The fact that she plays incredibly retarded/naive yet somehow has the presence of mind to hide her profile is really telling in regards to her legitimacy. If you want to dole out advice, you'd best learn how to spell it.

[IronSpike]

Not.A.Bomb

SORY i thougt my last topic was ok here but it was moved so i made this becuz u no i have a idea 2 tell u......its about girl nmaed princes rei and shes from the SUN country and she falls in luv with a solder named toshi from the moon kigdom AND sun and moon r at war so rei tries 2 run away.........wat do u guys think????

[natsuki7884]

all of you!!?? are you manga addic?! 'cause i'm a manga fan. I had this manga. its title is "BIZENGHAST" its so cool. Its all about a girl and a boy and they have to solve the rhymes. You have to read it crying crying . PROMISE!!! >.< telling truth