[NEW WEBCOMIC] Tale of Two Princes (feedback wanted)

[M -x- I c h I]

Hey everyone!
I'd like you to check out a new webcomic my friend and I started~
Tapastic: Tale of Two Princes
We also have a Facebook Page and DeviantArt
Information Journal

Feedback is wanted as it is both mine and the artist's first time releasing a comic and we want it to improve over time.

[Tenko72]

I read all the pages. It looks interesting, so far. How do you pronounce vhysps?

[Kyousouka]

If you just want to tell people that your comic exists and to check it out, then Promotions is where you should go.

If you'd like people to discuss it here, provide feedback/critique, etc, then CC is the right place, but you should say so in your OP. As it is now, it comes off as pure promotion.

[Xiam]

M -x- I c h I

Tale of Two Princes

SAID IF YOU WANT TO CALL ME BABY
JUST GO AHEAD NOW
AND IF YOU WANT TO TELL ME MAYBE
JUST GO AHEAD NOW
AND IF YOU WANTED TO BUY ME FLOWERS
JUST GO AHEAD NOW
AND IF YOU LIKE TO TALK FOR HOURS
JUST GO AHEAD NOW

Sorry... randomly broke out in song... art's looking good.

Tenko72

I read all the pages. It looks interesting, so far. How do you pronounce vhysps?

Looks like "visps."

[M -x- I c h I]

Vhysps is pronounced like visps but the v is slightly airy. Kind of like how you would pronounce weiss in German.
I actually would like feedback.
This is both myself and the artist's first webcomic and I would like to improve on it as the releases go on.

[Tenko72]

Thanks for answering. I couldn't tell if it was a long I sound or like vippies. Now, I know it's not either.

[M -x- I c h I]

Yeaaaah haha~
I have also added a link to our mangamagazine page that has a journal the explains a lot of background information and lists the main cast, etc.