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The first thing I noticed was the cover not being very appealing with the faulty blend. The borders around his body aren't very neat or the shadows in the background either. and maybe try making the red light from his eyes a little bigger or some details because just the size and level of emotion of it is awkward.
Make your darks- the darkest and the bold colors-bold. Without it-everything is very bland and flat with no power of appeal. And in comic book artwork those concepts are very powerful.
Ahh.. sweatdrop But it's really not as bad as I just probably made it sound.
Keep up the good work and work hard emotion_yatta
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The first thing I noticed was the cover not being very appealing with the faulty blend. The borders around his body aren't very neat or the shadows in the background either. and maybe try making the red light from his eyes a little bigger or some details because just the size and level of emotion of it is awkward.
Make your darks- the darkest and the bold colors-bold. Without it-everything is very bland and flat with no power of appeal. And in comic book artwork those concepts are very powerful.
Ahh.. sweatdrop But it's really not as bad as I just probably made it sound.
Keep up the good work and work hard emotion_yatta


thanks for the critique, i appreciate it. I'll definitely look into it.
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