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Volume two is now being posted on InkBlazers
As usual, comments, critique, and honest praise are welcome!

ANNOUNCEMENT!: CrossOver volume 1 is now published live on Amazon!
That's right, the first volume is now available for purchase! As a special treat for those who buy it, I've included a special color illustration in the copy. I hope you enjoy it, and if you do, please take the time to leave a glowing review heart
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This. Is. AWESOME!!!!!
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This. Is. AWESOME!!!!!

Aaahhh stop it (but seriously, go on)
In all seriousness, can you tell me what you like about it?
That will help me keep it going well ninja
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This. Is. AWESOME!!!!!

Aaahhh stop it (but seriously, go on)
In all seriousness, can you tell me what you like about it?
That will help me keep it going well ninja
My favorite thing her her reaction to the fact that she can't go home. (plus "The witch is back!) I have never read anything like this.

Love the art style, its always a plus. She's smart enough not to tell anyone she can teleport until she finds out more about whats going on.
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This. Is. AWESOME!!!!!

Aaahhh stop it (but seriously, go on)
In all seriousness, can you tell me what you like about it?
That will help me keep it going well ninja
My favorite thing her her reaction to the fact that she can't go home. (plus "The witch is back!) I have never read anything like this.

Love the art style, its always a plus. She's smart enough not to tell anyone she can teleport until she finds out more about whats going on.

Thank you very much! That is very encouraging.
I can't take credit for the art, but story-wise I will keep trying to produce an interesting story for you biggrin
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The art is quite impressive. I like how you draw her hair and her facial expression and her personality. However, I do have one major constructive criticism to point out, and believe me, take in this point and you will have more readers and fans.

NOTE: I have also made the same mistake in my past project, and it took me almost 250 pages to finally realize this.

From what I can see from the 2 chapters, you have completely fallen in love with your main character, correct? You HAVE to include her in EVERY single page cause IT IS so much fun to draw her. I totally understand that feeling, too.

But coming from me, an experienced-hobbyist-mangaka, you have to move your focal point to other characters in the coming chapters. Do you know why mainstream shonen manga are so popular? that is because the creator introduced at least 3 to 4 loveable characters in the first few chapters, so the reader won't get bored looking at the protagonist all the time.

Hope this helps.

EDIT: you are probably the writer not the artist so this post is aiming at this project, which includes everyone.
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The art is quite impressive. I like how you draw her hair and her facial expression and her personality. However, I do have one major constructive criticism to point out, and believe me, take in this point and you will have more readers and fans.

NOTE: I have also made the same mistake in my past project, and it took me almost 250 pages to finally realize this.

From what I can see from the 2 chapters, you have completely fallen in love with your main character, correct? You HAVE to include her in EVERY single page cause IT IS so much fun to draw her. I totally understand that feeling, too.

But coming from me, an experienced-hobbyist-mangaka, you have to move your focal point to other characters in the coming chapters. Do you know why mainstream shonen manga are so popular? that is because the creator introduced at least 3 to 4 loveable characters in the first few chapters, so the reader won't get bored looking at the protagonist all the time.

Hope this helps.

EDIT: you are probably the writer not the artist so this post is aiming at this project, which includes everyone.

I do take your critique to point. And don't worry, I have a full cast of characters which will begun to be introduced in chapter three. (Note: If the character has a name, you know he's going to appear again)
I considered starting to introduce characters earlier, but I wondered if that would be rushing things as I thought there were some questions needing answers before then.
Please continue to read and let me know if you spot anything else that needs attention.
In the meantime, I've posted a few character sketches of other characters HERE To give you a window to look through
PS, I've updated the manga smile
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manga updated!
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manga updated!
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manga updated!
WHOOOOO!!!!

Be sure to let me know what you think!
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manga updated!
WHOOOOO!!!!

Be sure to let me know what you think!
Love it!! I cant wait to find out what happens next!!
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manga updated!
WHOOOOO!!!!

Be sure to let me know what you think!
Love it!! I cant wait to find out what happens next!!

Good to hear. I am probably going to have to slow down on the updates. But check in every Saturday, And I will have a handful of pages up smile
I will let you know if I can make them sooner.
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Im putting you on my must watch list
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Im putting you on my must watch list

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pretty good so far. ^^ there were some issues (very minor) that i noticed, like i wish she would stop saying "mom and dad" and maybe say "parents" on the page where she's wondering if they'll start to worry she's missing.

other than that, there are a few art inconsistencies, but they're pretty much clearing up on their own, so not much of an issue there.

good work and keep going!

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