Corner of the Universe
So I desided to draw a manga and see how far I can go with my art, I know I'm not really good but this is this pratice it's not the real thing. I was hoping that maybe one day I can get a program that can let me draw in manga style so yeah. And no it's is not like vampire knight this is a demon/vampire/angel manga. I know I'm not really good at feet, hand's, or other stuff that you might fined very bad drawing but still. Like I said before this is just pratice.
The main person is the girl in the middle called Remey and I don't know what to call the two guy's yet. I will deside that later in the progress. I hope you will enjoy my art and wish me luck. My dream is to be an manga artist.

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So this is this is my first page of my manga took me three hour's to do, well it felt like it xD. So this is just a dream that she's having and her hair is curled. I'm not really good at drawing curled hair but this is just pratice and hope to go furether. Vampire Knight inspired me to draw a manga and so did all anime that I love. She is having a dream that a vampire or someone murdered her family right in front of her.
So this is the second page of the manga that I'm working on. As far as I can tell that she's in a living room sitting by the fire looking frighten beacuse someone was murdering her family in front of her and then I tried to draw blood (I'm not really good at that LOL) but it's worth a shot at drawing it. Now I'm not really good at drawing far and near so yeah you can tell by the photo itself. So I hope that you will enjoy it as much as I do. I will be drawing every day and see how much I can draw and imangin of the manga. So thank's for vewing.
You need a lot of work. First of all, your background for your cover is blank, not even color. If it's going to be no color at least at a background scene. I wouldn't give u because my art grew better thanks to my perseverance. You just start drawing your characters and that's not good, you need to start off drawing your characters with joints and then flesh add then add clothes. That's why your characters look ******** up. Real manga artist draw by hand and when they are skilled enough then they use programs on computers but I hate those because they take up too much time, You need to make your main character stand out more by making her stick out more and push the other two characters in the back. If there are demon/vampire/angel characters why don't I see tails, wings, fangs, and that type of stuff. Make them look realistic but still manga. You need to read more manga books. As for your characters, the girls arms need to be drawn straight down by her sides if that's what you are trying to do. You need to finish the guy one the right, his legs and draw him in closer. Also, your panels are WAY off. If you look a manga books, then you can copy their panels but yours are uneven, you should use a ruler or straight edge. The last picture, the one with the girl in the castle or whatever, you need straighter lines. It looks messy and out of place. Your drawings look like a eight year old. You need to make your background more visible because I am assuming it's a castle but I shouldn't have to assume, I should just look at it and know. It seems like you scribbled underneath the girl and I do not know what that squiggly stuff is around her. You need to fix your spelling and make your words more visible. If you are drawing just your character's face on a page your need to take up the WHOLE page. Or if you don't think your writing is bad you could always type out what you want and glue them to your page. It needs A LOT of work and you have a long way to go but keep drawing and you will evolve.