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Hello

Just wanted to show you this Project!

don´t ask me for translate i just showing you for critique porpouses biggrin

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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art
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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art


Hey man! it's been a while!
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Hey man! it's been a while!
i got ymira art at last
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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art


Hey man! it's been a while!
i got ymira art at last


reminds me of that plis and show me biggrin
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LOL why i have -1 vote!? LOL
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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art


Hey man! it's been a while!
i got ymira art at last


reminds me of that plis and show me biggrin

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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art


Hey man! it's been a while!
i got ymira art at last


reminds me of that plis and show me biggrin

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Lucky Bish! thats awesome!
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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art


Hey man! it's been a while!
i got ymira art at last


reminds me of that plis and show me biggrin

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Lucky Bish! thats awesome!
i had to barrow the money for it
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Amazing work, man! Seriously awesome
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Amazing work, man! Seriously awesome


Thank you Murdoc-kun! wanted to share this a little time a go
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O.O wooow.

Pues, siento que podrías hacer algo mas interesante con el texto. Por ahora solo siento que lo pusiste en donde menos estorbara los dibujos.
En general lo que he visto es que lo ponen de una manera que favorezca su lectura rápida, de tal manera que se lea como una S invertida en toda la hoja.

También, en el segundo panel siento que necesitas hacer un poco más notorio que la chava es la que está hablando haciendo que contraste de los demás. No es necesario pero sugeriría eso que dices que se siente diferente.

Y me da un poco de ansia que no se vea completo el pie de la chava en el último panel, pero seguro eso es sólo cosa mia.

Pero en general es hermoso! Quiero leer la siguiente pagina
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This is amazing

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