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Post: 87413849_1 created on Mon, 12 Aug 2013 23:13:43 +0000
Posted: Mon, 12 Aug 2013 23:13:43 +0000

Hello

Just wanted to show you this Project!

don´t ask me for translate i just showing you for critique porpouses biggrin

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Post: 87413849_2 created on Tue, 13 Aug 2013 00:05:54 +0000
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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art

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Post: 87413849_3 created on Tue, 13 Aug 2013 00:06:48 +0000
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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art

Hey man! it's been a while!

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Post: 87413849_4 created on Tue, 13 Aug 2013 00:07:42 +0000
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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art

Hey man! it's been a while!

i got ymira art at last

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Post: 87413849_5 created on Tue, 13 Aug 2013 00:26:48 +0000
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lord of Crows

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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art

Hey man! it's been a while!

i got ymira art at last

reminds me of that plis and show me biggrin

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Post: 87413849_6 created on Tue, 13 Aug 2013 00:27:07 +0000
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LOL why i have -1 vote!? LOL

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Post: 87413849_7 created on Tue, 13 Aug 2013 00:54:14 +0000
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Bloody Incubus

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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art

Hey man! it's been a while!

i got ymira art at last

reminds me of that plis and show me biggrin

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Post: 87413849_8 created on Tue, 13 Aug 2013 01:00:53 +0000
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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art

Hey man! it's been a while!

i got ymira art at last

reminds me of that plis and show me biggrin

Lucky Bish! thats awesome!

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Post: 87413849_9 created on Tue, 13 Aug 2013 01:02:06 +0000
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Bloody Incubus

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Love it my friend love it. I miss getting your art

Hey man! it's been a while!

i got ymira art at last

reminds me of that plis and show me biggrin

Lucky Bish! thats awesome!

i had to barrow the money for it

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Post: 87413849_10 created on Tue, 13 Aug 2013 03:02:26 +0000
Posted: Tue, 13 Aug 2013 03:02:26 +0000

Amazing work, man! Seriously awesome

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Post: 87413849_11 created on Tue, 13 Aug 2013 03:15:28 +0000
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Murdoc Betelgeuse

Amazing work, man! Seriously awesome

Thank you Murdoc-kun! wanted to share this a little time a go

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Post: 87413849_12 created on Tue, 13 Aug 2013 06:02:59 +0000
Posted: Tue, 13 Aug 2013 06:02:59 +0000

O.O wooow.

Pues, siento que podrías hacer algo mas interesante con el texto. Por ahora solo siento que lo pusiste en donde menos estorbara los dibujos.
En general lo que he visto es que lo ponen de una manera que favorezca su lectura rápida, de tal manera que se lea como una S invertida en toda la hoja.

También, en el segundo panel siento que necesitas hacer un poco más notorio que la chava es la que está hablando haciendo que contraste de los demás. No es necesario pero sugeriría eso que dices que se siente diferente.

Y me da un poco de ansia que no se vea completo el pie de la chava en el último panel, pero seguro eso es sólo cosa mia.

Pero en general es hermoso! Quiero leer la siguiente pagina

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Post: 87413849_13 created on Mon, 02 Sep 2013 19:37:24 +0000
Posted: Mon, 02 Sep 2013 19:37:24 +0000

This is amazing

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