SansotsuCross
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- Posted: Sun, 21 Apr 2013 22:14:11 +0000
I would really like some feedback on this webcomic of mine.
I love the actual plot for it, but as I've progressed with writing it and drawing it out...it came out completely different from what I imagined.
I feel like the story may be too slow--that it won't engage my readers and keep them coming back for the good parts. If I am right about this I will probably come back to the story later and rewrite it (once I figure out how to rework it in a more interesting way).
So my big concern:
Is it engaging/interesting enough to keep the reader coming back for more?
Here's the link:
http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=123924
*Side note: it's about 5 pages away from the chapter end, those pages will be released Thursday (April 25th) for those would like to finish the chapter before making any comments about it
Also please excuse the art XD I've been playing around trying to figure out a good way to add in screentones. I have found trying to buy physical ones a challenge, so I've been messing around with Photoshop, trying to import screentones and messing with its built in tools to try and accomplish the look I want (still struggling with it). However, I've found out about Manga Studio so if I do continue this comic the next chapter will probably be made using that instead (Hurrah!).
I love the actual plot for it, but as I've progressed with writing it and drawing it out...it came out completely different from what I imagined.
I feel like the story may be too slow--that it won't engage my readers and keep them coming back for the good parts. If I am right about this I will probably come back to the story later and rewrite it (once I figure out how to rework it in a more interesting way).
So my big concern:
Is it engaging/interesting enough to keep the reader coming back for more?
Here's the link:
http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=123924
*Side note: it's about 5 pages away from the chapter end, those pages will be released Thursday (April 25th) for those would like to finish the chapter before making any comments about it
Also please excuse the art XD I've been playing around trying to figure out a good way to add in screentones. I have found trying to buy physical ones a challenge, so I've been messing around with Photoshop, trying to import screentones and messing with its built in tools to try and accomplish the look I want (still struggling with it). However, I've found out about Manga Studio so if I do continue this comic the next chapter will probably be made using that instead (Hurrah!).