Kersian
phantomkitsune
See, but I'm different! I have grammar and an actual plot and all that good stuff . . .
I don't know why, but when I hear "but I'm different" I get a skeptical. Like when Stephenie Meyer gave a response to some criticism. Saying that her character's love were better than the ones from The Princess Bride and Romeo and Juliet.
Let's not forget: both The Princess Bride and Romeo and Juliet are satire. Twilight is meant to be serious business.
But then Smeyer thinks Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy don't have a good relationship because if one died, the other could move on with their life. Because 'twoo wuv' means engaging in self-destructive behavior.
Phantom: I appreciate the fact that you haven't gone all, "Waaah, my feelings are huuurt!!11!1" And it really will be hard to find an artist for free, unless you have a truly engaging story. Granted, seeing as you have good grammar and don't act like a whiny brat, it may go smoother.