I like them but they borrow way too much from their inspiration. I know you labeled them JTHM like.Sadly I can't enjoy them as much as I would something else. JTHM and I Feel Sick were from the years of my life where I could relate to the darkness of the comics thus the style of that artwork will always hold that darkness and drama that was in my life. But it's nice to look back sometimes.
I think the joke is kinda not funny as it opposex to the tone of the comic and what it dtaws inspiration from. But I really like the drawing and the coloring, that kind of work and skill is something to strive for.