I had actually checked this out on comic fury about a week ago. I'm liking the art for it, and have really liked the take you have with the furry-esque characters.
The main thing that has really jarred me is the writing. It seems a little flip-floppy, and I had problems keeping track of what is going on. I get the the character is recounting events, but I feel that there should be something to visually show the reader what is in the past, and what is in the present. There are many ways to do this, having the gutters of the page inked black, grayscale vs. color, changing panels border shape, etc. Also some of the pages don't flow very well as far as panel set-up is concerned. As a reader I felt confused as to what panel I was supposed to read first. I found myself trying to read the pages right to left, and left to right, to try to figure out the proper flow of the dialogue.