ruby6176
yes I am planning on showing off my work, but only to people who actually want to see it and won't make mean comments about my work.
Restricting your audience to a hand-picked group that will do nothing but praise your work, regardless of the quality, is the surest way to stay awful. Constructive criticism is like a cheat sheet for improvement. Other people can see flaws that you can't; flaws that might otherwise take you years to correct.
If I walked out of the bathroom with a trail of toilet paper stuck to my shoe heel, I'd want someone to tell me, not let me parade around like a fool because they were afraid I might not feel pretty after they let me know it was there.
And you asked me what you think about your "stories." Frankly, they're not stories. They're settings. They're ideas. Like a lot of kids who come in here that have never actually done comics (And yeah, this is me publicly stating I
do not believe you've actually sat down and drawn any pages), you sound like you've got the first ten pages planned, and little else.
A girl with a poisonous kiss goes to school with other magical kids. Okay, so? And?
A bunch of element-themed universes exist, but one's gonna go away someday. All-righty. So what?
See this? You have the first dot. Very possibly even less than that. Maybe half a dot. What's the conflict? Who're the antagonists and protagonists? What's at risk? You don't know, because you haven't thought about it.
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