House Boat temporary link, first chapter unfinished

[Hippeh Panda]

Is it wrong that the first thing that came to my mind to compliment this was "I want to eat it"? Apparently work has caught up with me.

Anyway I recall being in love with this the first time I saw your thread, and when I found it tonight, I got all excited all over again.

absolutely brilliant.

[blinkanjell01]

wooo! i'm glad you guys like it :O

[Sera Michaelis]

I love it so much! I can't wait for more! :]

[blinkanjell01]

thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it :O

[Potato Lord]

a little too much "male gaze" in pg 5 for my preference, but I love the concept of floating houses.
Sooo...I will keep reading of course!

[blinkanjell01]

I find that kinda funny considering I'm a lady! But thank you for reading :O

[Mink_LaLa]

I could see how page five could be seen that way, but she's in her house in her room, so I'm like, okay sure. But yeah, I am enjoying it so far.

[KomiyanZaibach]

Women can do male gaze too, but page 5 isn't it. If it were male gaze she'd be waking up making an O face at the camera and her boobs would be 4 sizes bigger, as it is she's just waking up like a regular person does.

Love it so far, knew I would. More please!

[Mink_LaLa]

Some people might view seeing any naked amount of the 'upper female anatomy' as male gaze, maybe. But as I said, she's in her room so I hadn't even thought that. :/

[KomiyanZaibach]

Well, it IS a sin to own those razz

[Mink_LaLa]

Those damn dirty pillows! But we're getting off topic. >x>