Haunt Me: A watercolor storybook!

[l l c h a b o l l]

http://hauntme.smackjeeves.com

Please give it a look, its only 9 pages long so far biggrin

[ElfinNissa]

Very fun. I love the expressions and the colors. The writing's surprisingly neat for the medium you're using too.

[estardust]

it's really nice! :>
i just think the art is a bit wasted on the writing! try looking at some typography, either standard cartoon letters or whateverrrr. check this artist out for ex, his ink/watercolor letters are beautiful :>

[Tenko72]

This is so silly! I love the part with the Hot Pocket, because it's so true. I like the art too.

[[~Ramble.Corset~]]

I really like it! I can't wait for more!

[Rangeri]

Brilliant!! Five stars!! Keep up the good work wink

[scarletmedusa]

l l c h a b o l l

http://hauntme.smackjeeves.com

Please give it a look, its only 9 pages long so far biggrin

Geez, you're a pro! heart crying

[l l c h a b o l l]

estardust

it's really nice! :>
i just think the art is a bit wasted on the writing! try looking at some typography, either standard cartoon letters or whateverrrr. check this artist out for ex, his ink/watercolor letters are beautiful :>

Holy s**t he makes me fel like such a noob

GORGEOUS OMG.

Thank you! Sorry my handwriting is poor. c:

[estardust]

l l c h a b o l l

Holy s**t he makes me fel like such a noob

GORGEOUS OMG.

Thank you! Sorry my handwriting is poor. c:

lol well he's like godly! I hope looking at his art can help or at least inspire you since he uses similar mediums as you do.

one more thing, once you feel comfortable with it you might want to consider changing your paper to something more smooth? I know the one youre using now is probably easy to work with w watercolors and maybe you like the texture, but I think it'll look a lot more professional and storybook-like if you get some good quality paper.

anyway I'm sure your book will be brilliant! love your style and the colurrs. keep up the good work whee

[Kaxen]

I like the paper texture. *probably a terribly biased opinion*



It was interesting. I'd like to see more.

The lettering could use some work.

I don't really like the look of how thick watercolor over lineart ends up sometimes making the lineart stop being black/dark gray.

[Freiheit]

Since you're distributing it digitally, make use of that egde wink try to adjust your colour/contrast and get those ink lines darker, they've been faded by the paint. Other then that, it's lovely work smile

[P A Y A S O T R I S T E]

its really cute

[iGiant-Midget]

That's so clever!
Your style is very unique and the rhymes make it so cute~
I hope you continue with this.

[circus - narcotics]

i absolutely adore your style. please keep going! ;v;

[[~Ramble.Corset~]]

#10 why you no load? D;