I'm thinking up a title so that's still pending. The storyline is simple at first but it gets a lot more exiting after about 1/2 a min. of reading. It's a little slow moving but I use the extra time to get into detail. I try to use the perfect amount of action but not overdoseing it. I'm having all of my characters relate to my friends so everyone understands perfectly. The main Idea will be about something wrong in the neighborhood with two worst enimies that find the only thing that can stop it. Do the have time to get over their differences? Another problem is, they are already tied up in high school eek . It's a race against the principal to stop whatever hides in the alleyway. twisted