Comment on my lame comic strip plox! [Before And After]

[parkinglot90]

Ok then here is my before and after of At Harry's house #4.
Comment PLOX!
AFTER

BEFORE

[parkinglot90]

I have more, this is just the beginning. xd

[Mr McGrumpypants]

You have got to be kidding me.

[utopiansky]

hilarious! please post more!

[keynesblade]

I agree with utopiansky. Very witty, very "Outsider Art"

[tazmarie3991]

Your handwriting sucks =P lol. I love your stick people comics though ^_^

[blinkanjell01]

Sorry dude, this is awful.

[tazmarie3991]

he is a LIARRRRR =P

[parkinglot90]

i know but this is the buildup to the more funny ones, in my opinion at least because the ones that i wrote just for the heck of it needd a story. also, my strips are an auired taste razz

[tazmarie3991]

blinkanjel01, u are mean, Didnt ur mother ever teach u if u dont have anything nice to say, dont say anything at all??

[parkinglot90]

I dont mind criticism, i need it.

[blinkanjell01]

tazmarie3991

blinkanjel01, u are mean, Didnt ur mother ever teach u if u dont have anything nice to say, dont say anything at all??

He said to comment, so I did. Didn't your mother ever teach you to not sass your elders?

Anyways dude, I'm at least happy to hear you can take criticism. I'm sure you'll get better if you keep at it.