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see this is better since there's actually breaks between the panels, however the characters don't need to have a different coloured text for each person, and the bubble doesn't need to be translucent either, it just makes it harder to read
a troll btw is someone who intentionally goes out of their way to piss people off or act like an idiot. Some people like to make terrible comics for the sake of having others waste their time trying to help them when the intent was for it to BE terrible. it's pretty much the equivalent of running into a room and being like 'Justin bieber, now ARGUE!!!' or 'Christianity sucks, just sayin' and then not listening to anyone as they attempt to reason with a troll. most trolls are easily identifiable by their language and behaviour and should be ignored
well then i'm not a troll
sweatdrop
i'm a amatuer comicker and digital artist
beside a little work on anatomy and realism i am good sketcher
i want some critiques and suggestions
so far my comics suck
so much that some of the viewers think im a troll
now i would like suggestions to improve it
so far i need a better script, planned storyboard, better comic panels, lines and colors
don't skew or distort and
i have to take time on my backgrounds too
i took drafting in high school ACAD was my friend i would use an example but i believe i turned it in
i'm always in a rush because of college work
but it's not an excuse especially if i want to make a selling comic one day
should i just go for flat colors mainly and only used shadows/shines to express event or situation
example
if a characters under an umbrella in a shadow or it a light glowing
so translucent bubbles make it hard to read?
i might have to make the text black and make it whiter
i make it translucent so the whole scene is visible
i tried giving color and font to start the individuality of the characters
but is it okay to make the text bubble outline a color
might not be a good idea so
i have to work on character expressions so the work can define itself
and accents