comic: The Monstruos Ray Horrible Horrible Misadventures

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Hello people.
Well this is just the first part of a comic I decided to make.
Its a bout a lizard man during the production of a middle XX century horror movie.
and well hope you enjoy it and critics are welcome of course.
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[Tenko72]

It's legible. That's good. I think the font you used is best in small doses and not all the time, though.

That rock actually really amused me. That monster is crazy. I want to see what happens next.

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Tenko72

It's legible. That's good. I think the font you used is best in small doses and not all the time, though.

That rock actually really amused me. That monster is crazy. I want to see what happens next.

jejeje ok Ill try and use a little less that font XD

Ill upload part 2 uhmmm soon :I I think.
thnks for commenting

[Teina]

<3 the rock. The dialogue and expressions are great. If I could find anything to crit, it might be that the art is a little bit sketchy... though it doesn't really bother me or get in the way of reading.

Seriously though. That rock. *Gushgush.*

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Teina

<3 the rock. The dialogue and expressions are great. If I could find anything to crit, it might be that the art is a little bit sketchy... though it doesn't really bother me or get in the way of reading.

Seriously though. That rock. *Gushgush.*

Jeje thank you for reading n_n there will be more parts soon, and more rock of course. Je it does look sketchy.