Maybe it's Bile Fascination. 8D
Actually reading it, I know I was thinking, "Wait, no, go back to the vampire thing! That's relatively interesting! Or, at least, better to read than this teen drama bullshit!"
I could go into a wall of text, but one of the problems is the PACING. It seems to go too fast and when something bad happens to a character, the reaction is more, "Oh no, that person I barely know and didn't really care about!" For example, one chick IMMEDIATELY decided to screw around on her boyfriend for being late for ONE date. She didn't wait to see if he had a good reason for not showing up (people trying to murder you is probably a good reason), she didn't talk to him about it, it's never said that this is a common occurrence. She cheats and then dumps him.
The guy who gets dumped acts completely heart-broken and his response was something to the effect of, "Is this how love ends?" and proceeds to wangst. The PROBLEM here is that the way this thing is paced it gives the impression they've only been dating for a few DAYS.
...WAT.
AND this chick is the same one who start dating a guy she knew her friend liked first and was shy about asking out. Yeah. She's kind of a b***h.
OMFG, there's so much I can say about this, but I'm TOTALLY going to finish it (Bile Fascination, indeed). That way, if I review it, no one can say I didn't read all of it.
...That was way longer than I meant it to be. >x>;