enchantedsleeper
Ah, why, are you going somewhere? My timezone is GMT; what's yours?
I'm not actually sure how much I like the novel. Maybe it's not my kind of thing. But your quality of writing seems good, although you do switch tense a lot which is disorientating for the reader - might want to watch out for that.
Like I said before, I want to focus on the art part of the comic at the moment (after all, the art is at least three quarters of the whole thing) and so there won't be much happening writing-wise. Still, I'll send you a guild invite; I'd be interested in your input/ideas on the latest project we have going. Don't be put off by the lack of activity within the guild; I'm always hanging around, and I hope to start up some more threads in there soon.
Writing stories is so exciting I forget about all tenses! Just kidding, I hadn't noticed that; neither did my creative writing teacher, though you seem to have the same opinion of it as she does.
My Writing Site. You might want to check that out too.
I'll be sure to like the guild xD