I have to say your artwork is fantasticly drawn, I just think the lineart would look much better in black. You have the faces drawn very well but I think the paneling could do to be a little more interesting rather than just stacked on top of each other. I think three pages is a little too short for a "to be continued" because there isn't enough to get us interested. We might be interested to read another 10 pages, but not just to go "Oh, okay, the end then."
Still, great job and keep up the drawings, with practice, I can see you becoming a truly amazing artist.
Oh gosh, I already know which one you are talking about. That one was rushed hardcore. I wanted to do SO much more with that one, but I was constricted with time and sick. That's why when I get started on the rest of the comic, I am going to be going out of the box and playing with color.
My comfort zone is, honestly, doing the comics all in traditional. So I am trying my hand at drawing a comic completely in digital.
And thank you for the positive feedback, by the way.