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Laira
was awoke from coma and realized
that herself is not a living thing but a doll.Her fiance,Prince Erique has been killed by a mysterious guy.Laira
decided to joined FLAM, a military organization at Pillatus
that hunting vampires to
revenge her fiance's death.She meets Veltrich, prince at Pillatus who
had a similar face
with Erique. Nevertheless,
in fact that similarity had a prove that he is not Erique. Laira starts to worry
if she fall in love with Veltrich and betray her love for Erique.
Where is the way of love Laira now?
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