Worst Fanfic Ever

[PrincessNaida]

I swear my IQ dropped about 10 points just from reading the first chapter. =/

[Oblivion the Forsaker]

Reading the short first chapter of this fan-fic. . . I honestly would not be interested at all with it. The beginning of the story was just uninspired, unthoughtful, and freakin' random, and the rest sounds like something you'd find in a dairy from a gothic version of beverly hills 90210. "I drank a bottle of blood". . . hmm, this seems to be playing off a gothic stereo type. . . or something involving an obsession with vampires. . .

I think a great opening of for this story would have been the the main character sees the world, or the room, around her/him, describing the darkness of her life, and the gloomy hopelessness of society that has driven her to being what she is. . . would have caught my attention a lot more. . .

[Nephilia]

Kousei Shikyo

Reading the short first chapter of this fan-fic. . . I honestly would not be interested at all with it. The beginning of the story was just uninspired, unthoughtful, and freakin' random, and the rest sounds like something you'd find in a dairy from a gothic version of beverly hills 90210. "I drank a bottle of blood". . . hmm, this seems to be playing off a gothic stereo type. . . or something involving an obsession with vampires. . .

I think a great opening of for this story would have been the the main character sees the world, or the room, around her/him, describing the darkness of her life, and the gloomy hopelessness of society that has driven her to being what she is. . . would have caught my attention a lot more. . .

|| Agreed. ||

[Gwogobo]

You know what? I have made it my mission to write one absolutely disgusting review for each chapter. That's right, I will. I have been inspired.

[Fukutaicho-Kira-Izuru]

XD You are the only person I know that would put all that Kousei. But that's okay! Because you are discussing it like the rest of us!

[PrincessNaida]

Gwogobo

You know what? I have made it my mission to write one absolutely disgusting review for each chapter. That's right, I will. I have been inspired.

Good luck with that.
I'd probably lose my mind if I tried.

[Stigmata-chan]

. . . . speechless.... gonk

[Fukutaicho-Kira-Izuru]

XD All I can say is that, being a fanfiction writer myself, this fict puts me to shame. But it also gives me laughs when I'm bored. X3

[- m a c a r o n i e -]

I LOL`D

[Oblivion the Forsaker]

Meimitzu_the_Shinigami

XD You are the only person I know that would put all that Kousei. But that's okay! Because you are discussing it like the rest of us!

Well, of course I would. It's a little offensive to literature everywhere. I mean, the author is trying to use elements of realism, but the set up is so bad. . . it's like something that should belong in a dairy or something. But, if this author has the same problem I have in writting, which is making a good start for a literary work, than I understand. . . but there was no effort in this at all.

[Stigmata-chan]

Best review ever "Jesus
2007-12-16
ch 11, anon. abuseI am Jesus, my child, and I am worried about you. " haha That fic was more like her brain throwing up its morsels onto the screen.

[Fukutaicho-Kira-Izuru]

Honestly, I don't know if the authoress gives a crap about her writing or the really bad reviews, or she just needs help. Either way, it's just completely horrible and it hurts my eyes to read it. ><

[snowbunny21]

i think my face exploded

[Oblivion the Forsaker]

WTF! Why is Dumbledore in this story? LOL, he catches her and her boy toy in the "act" in chapter 3!