Fallen Angel

[burning the midnight oil]

Fallen Angel

Alright, people.. This is a forum for GintaXAlviss's story Fallen Angel. Or known here as Momo M Taro.

Oh, and by the way.. Since I am very lazy when it comes to rules here. Just follow the rules that the Chatterbox category provides in "Chatterbox Rules & Guidelines".

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-sits down- Anyway, let's chat. smile

[Momo M Taro]

You got to ask the question. It's my story. X rofl

[burning the midnight oil]

Wait, what question? XD

I'm totally lost here.

[Momo M Taro]

The_Time_Is_Midnight

Wait, what question? XD

I'm totally lost here.

Ignore no0bs. This is the chat room. You said you wanted to know more about the story.

[burning the midnight oil]

Ahh, yes, let's make sure that this forum doesn't die.
>.>
We probably need more people then. XD

Anyway, I always wondered why you started Fallen Angel. If you stated your reason on the profile, then I might've forgot. I was always curious. ^^

[Momo M Taro]

We just need Zelina and Blackie...and look for all those people on my profile that say they like my story and that should be good. mrgreen

Okay...how do I begin.

Li: OMG flashbacks!

Okay...why did I start...oh yeah! It was Febuary 22, 2008. (I wrote it in my journal). It was during Science class. I wasn't going to listen to water shed crap when I should have. The science teacher liked me so I was able to hide behind this desk doing whatever the hell I want behind it. I took out my journal that I write my story ideas and started plotting ideas into it.

Title: Fallen Angel

Genre: Suspense, Romance, Angst, Mystery, Humor, Adventure/Action, Drama, Friendship (in this order in this journal but not in the story. There is more Drama/Friendship/Suspense/Angst than anything else. The mix of this many genres is like Elfen Lied.)

Category: Super Smash Brothers (later added SEGA and Final Fantasy)

And then I wrote the chapter numbers and titles from 1 to 20. It was only going to be that long until I realize that it wasn't enough then added 30 more chapter making it 50. But I could only write 11 chapter names because I couldn't really understand my story. All I knew was this at the beginning.

Someone was stalking Pit and that person is turning the others into their trophy form. It would be that way until Pit became one and then it was too late.

That plot didn't work. I WAS going to make Link and Marth be Pit's best friends but I realized they weren't the same age so I was thinking of the ones that were close to Pit's age and that's how Sonic and Satoshi became his best friends in this fic and basically the other fics I write with Ike either being a friend or the romantic interest.

In school, I couldn't focus when I should have and I was working on The Song of Hope at the time. Sure Ike was in the story and Pit was mentioned as the angel that Ike was looking for after a tournament, but he wasn't in character and I lost some steam for the story when I kept turning to the Fallen Angel page in my journal which is only 2 pages. I just kept staring at the screen realizing that no one will truly appreciate The Song of Hope and the person that took the time to read it wasn't on line as much and hasn't updated her PoT fic Broken Innocence. I gave up when she didn't come on and decided it wouldn't hurt to work on chapter 1.

I started it at school and Mcenche was telling me to listen to the old hag. I didn't care. This was getting good. So I only listed four pairings at the beginning because that was all I could think of and I was in love with Knuckles/Sonic at the time. I tried to give Sonic a rather big role in the first chapter since I was reading some Brawl fics and noticed how isolated he was from all the Smashers because he was a SEGA character. I did NOT intend for Sonic to be the second main character as he was going to be very minor and Ike/Pit would be focused on more.

I didn't the chapter when I finished though because I was so trying to remember how Sonic would act.

And that's when I encounter Solid Snake Soldier (wasn't her name at the time). She was already writing Ike/Pit and Snake/Marth when I found her. Sure the characters were OOC but that gave me enough motivation to post the first chapter. And then when she posted A Brawl to End All Brawls or something like that, it gave me so much love for the other characters that made me focus on everyone in the story instead of just Pit and Ike.

That's how Fallen Angel started...and then getting five reviews on chapter 1 and then six again on chapter 2, it was the motivation from other people. The more chapters I posted, the more reviews I got ranging from 4-8 and recently it's around 8-11 reviews per chapter. Mcenche wasn't interested at first either.

Yeah...as the story went on...I gave Sonic a bigger role and Fox DEFINITELY got the bigger role because he was the one that suspected Pit and was on the mark but he would have been gone on chapter 7...but something changed me for some strange reason and I decided to keep him only in the form of a miniature Fox. And look where that led. It lead to to Fox/Sonic/Knuckles. I changed the pairing without destroying the beginning of the story because I hinted that Knuckles might have liked Sonic but in a different way than planned. Knuckles is also more uncaring now that I put Fox/Sonic.

You know theme songs for characters? I could think of so many for Ike/Pit but I couldn't for Knuckles/Sonic but when it was replaced with Fox/Sonic so many theme songs matched such as Accidentally in Love, I'd do Anything, and All About US. It was easy to ignore people on the bus thinking of their theme songs. blaugh

Oh yeah! That incident in where Sonic gets...can't say it on this website because they hate us. Anyway, what originally was going to happen was that Sonic would think that he was sexually assaulted and then Li (wasn't his name at the time) would stated that wasn't the case and Sonic would go back to his happy go lucky personality...but I realized that I loved torturing Sonic when I was younger so I had SO much fun writing that scene and made it possible. Look how many people saw that amazing and thinking outside the box. wink

And there was the story hitting off chapter after chapter and the more happy I was with this story. So much motivation compared to the other fics...and that's why I gave up all anime fics because they weren't getting the same amount of reviews or even hits as Fallen Angel. Fallen Angel gets 100 hits everyday and over 200 on the weekend. It's that popular.

I had to change the name of some chapters and think of different plots before I fall asleep. And then adding pairings that wouldn't ruin the story and make since in the long run. I was only open to using Kid Icarus, Pokemon and Sonic reference, but as the story went on, I didn't know much about the other characters and started surfing the net at school about each and every series and do my homework at home and then surf more. Once I bought Star Fox Adventure though, I decided that I would get every game of at least that character from Smash Brothers to know the character. And that's how it's easy to portray other characters like those from Star Fox, Kirby, Mario and SEGA. I still don't use that much Metroid and Meta Gear reference when I should...and I'll add the Fire Emblem reference near chapter 29 and 30 since I don't know much about the series. DX

But playing other games made me flesh out the characters especially Luigi. I had NO idea that he might hate his brother but playing Super Paper Mario makes me realize that he hates his brother somewhat.

The next series I plan on getting though is Fire Emblem and WarioWare to know those characters.

And heres the thing, I was only thinking of adding the Sonic cast in the story at the beginning and now there is a character from each series at least. smile

You what was funny though. At the beginning of the story, everyone thinks it's Marth that's stalking Pit. I made a joke at the beginning stating that it would an OC character. I wanted to see how many people would get pissed off. It turns out to be Dark Pit. HIs original name was going to Fallen but that kind of sounded crappy so I decided that his name would be Lived Twilight. Lived is DEVIL spelled backwards matching his character and Twilight is the name he got from the Twilight Realm from Legend of Zelda Twilight Princess.

Li had the biggest change in personality. He was originally the dark part of Pit that wanted revenge for Pit leaving him in the underworld to die and live his life in shame until Li's boss came and picked him up. Li would have been the Lucy of the story hurting anyone in his way. He would have been MUCH crueler to Sonic in chapter 20. I would also have him despise Ike so much that we would try to kill him on occasions instead of leaving him alive and taunting Pit. And then later on in the story, I would have him sexually assault Pit and then have him die and there would be no sequel.

I did not like that, so I changed it. He would be sadistic but not to Lucy's point. His reasons for hurting Pit is because he feels like Pit and the other royal bodyguards don't love him anymore and stayed with Midna when he 'died'. And then Li's boss came and lied to him about them not caring for his death when they indeed did. This drives Li mad and he starts making the Smashers disappear but before he could, he had to take the body of one of the Smashers which is not revealed yet. As the story goes on, you learn from us royal bodyguards and Midna that he has a reason to do this and that he is regretting it dearly. This is why he can't help but pity Sonic when Sonic said that Pit wouldn't leave him and then he allowed Pit to save him and then ran away from Isaak because he couldn't face him.

Li: stressed THAT'S TOO MUCH INFORMATION PEPPER!

OH! Sorry! crying I went OVERBOARD with the explanations. That's like answering five questions.

1. What started Fallen Angel

2. How Sonic and Satoshi became Pit's friend

3. How the pairing and plot changed

4. What's keeping the story going

5. Li's character at the beginning of development

Sorry...I was rambling like Abbigale... sweatdrop

[EvilLilBlackie]

Alright! Tottaly going to have fun on this little bugger!....

Maybe I should do the same for Falling in Lust too XD....

Murf...

Oh well, since I love Lived's character to death, I'm curious on his development. Oh! And if you were the one that created Lived's race too...

[burning the midnight oil]

Yuki: At least it answered some of Vampy's questions, Li. Otherwise we'd be here aaaaall day. stare

Yup! Muahahaha, let's go 'bug' them. XD

Wow! Writing the plot and whatnot for Fallen Angel instead of paying attention in Science sounds like a way better choice. And much more entertaining. :3

I could've been one of the first reviewers if I got an account earlier.. lol

I wouldn't mind it if you kept on rambling! Truthfully, it was intresting! =D

Okay, the 6th question... Which will be asked later since I effin forgot it just now.
sweatdrop Hehehe...

Yuki: -sighs and shakes head- You really love forgetting, don't you?

At least I don't live in that city that Final Fantasy: Chocobo Dungeon takes place in..

Yuki: You forgot again the city name, didn't you?

... No comment ...

[Momo M Taro]

EvilLilBlackie

Alright! Tottaly going to have fun on this little bugger!....

Maybe I should do the same for Falling in Lust too XD....

Murf...

Oh well, since I love Lived's character to death, I'm curious on his development. Oh! And if you were the one that created Lived's race too...

YAY! Gold! Just comment on here until you get 10000 XD. Maybe then will the marketplace love you. LOL

Is that the question? Okay I got the answer. XD

Li: NO!

How to begin with question 6....Above was how he was suppose to be and stuff but his race...

Pit, Li, and the OC that hasn't been introduced yet Saber are of the race Amail. This race is neglected because of the forbidden way of the angels, humans, and devils. They have the wings of an angel, the personality of a devil, and heart of a human which could go either way. The three ways for a child to be born the forbidden way is different for the three races. For the angel, if the parents have sexual intercourse instead of doing the cloud ritual, they will have an angel Amail. For the human, if a man or women rapes a man or women and they happen to get pregnant from it, then their child will become a human Amail. The devil way is somewhat similar to the angel only they cannot be in love when they have sexual intercourse or the demon ritual. If they are in love, then they will have a devil Amail.

Pit was born the forbidden angel way thus was he shunned and abused by his parents. His hatred toward them however when he received the gold rings from that man that one day caused Li to be created from the darkness in his heart.

Li is considered a devil Amail despite being born fro Pit thus he has everything opposite of Pit until he met Isaak.

Saber has not been introduced yet, but she is a human Amail. Her mother abandoned her and she struggled to live on her own and it was hard for her. While she's b*tchy, she developed a dark personality from the abuse she had been receiving from everyone. Her sister Dorothy (who was not an Amail) tried her best to help her out but Saber didn't want help from a human. Dorothy dies mysteriously one days and Saber decides to figure out how her older sister died and goes to the casino where she died every day to find out clues. With this and keeping her grades up in college, it's not easy. Her friend and her brother also try to help her but her brother is more sinister than what she could ever think.

But I can't spoil the intermission because after Fallen Angel, Saber will be introduced and I can start the love rectangle.

Li: Hell no...

Yep. Saber likes Isaak and he likes her as a friend but loves Li. Li is in love with Isaak. Aqua is in love with Saber and Saber thinks of nothing of Aqua. You can see how the intermission is going to turn out.

[burning the midnight oil]

Welcome, Blackie. XD Hope you come and visit this thread every once in a while!

Looks like this thread might not have to go the grave.
YAY.

Welcome, Blackie. XD Hope you visit every once in a while.

Anyway, it sounds like the love rectangle will be intresting. You've mentioned that, and I'm guessing that this Saber is the OC sorta based off of Lucy. o.o Which is very, very creepy in so many ways.

Okay, 7th question:

Do you listen to any music for inspiration or anything whenever you're writing Fallen Angel? Or any of your other stories?

(For some reason, this question pops in my head whenever I read a fanfic or a story. ^^)
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This sorta sounds like an interview in a way. xd

[Zelina56]

I'VE FOUND YOU EVERYONE! 8D

herm...

hello, I'm Zelina56 =3 I've designer Lived's apparence

Sao: hello, I'm Sao, her assistant =3 *bowing* nice to meet you all

[burning the midnight oil]

Zelina56

I'VE FOUND YOU EVERYONE! 8D

herm...

hello, I'm Zelina56 =3 I've designer Lived's apparence

Sao: hello, I'm Sao, her assistant =3 *bowing* nice to meet you all

Maybe this forum won't die after all.. -grins-

Welcome to the forum! You can call me Vampy, Zelina. biggrin

Nice to meetcha, Sao. XD

Yuki: Yaaaay? XP I'm one of Vampy's favorite OCs. Aka, Favorite Torture Doll.

[EvilLilBlackie]

So I take it we're introducing OC characters I s'pose

Yami: *gets dragged in* Oi!

Omen: *appears randomly*...

Blackie: Meet my two awesome possum Characters. Omen Mysterra and Yami.

Omen: Greetings.

Yami: Sup' you psycho people that know this being *points at Blackie* ...and aren't running...

Blackie: Love you too Yami. But thanks for the explanation though, Momo <3

[Momo M Taro]

The_Time_Is_Midnight

Welcome, Blackie. XD Hope you come and visit this thread every once in a while!

Looks like this thread might not have to go the grave.
YAY.

Welcome, Blackie. XD Hope you visit every once in a while.

Anyway, it sounds like the love rectangle will be intresting. You've mentioned that, and I'm guessing that this Saber is the OC sorta based off of Lucy. o.o Which is very, very creepy in so many ways.

Okay, 7th question:

Do you listen to any music for inspiration or anything whenever you're writing Fallen Angel? Or any of your other stories?

(For some reason, this question pops in my head whenever I read a fanfic or a story. ^^)
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This sorta sounds like an interview in a way. xd

The forum won't die. XD And I'm asking Haruhi to join...but I don't know if she has an account or not...doubt it though because I haven't contacted her. smile

The 7th question is an obvious yes answer for many reasons. I listen to music that is part of the sound track to add motivation to the story and people know what I'm listening to when I'm typing it. I also listen to other random themes when the soundtrack isn't suppose to be played. I play perverted themes like Gunther Ding Ding Dong and Sir Mix A Lot Baby Got Back when I"m in my yaoi moment. During dark scenes, I listen to Link Park, TATU, and Evenessance (Damn spelling...) but I listen to Nickleback too. If the theme is totally light hearted, I tend to listen to any anime or video game theme I have such as Starry Heavens from Tales of Symphonia or really calm sounds like from the Full Moon O Sagashite soundtrack like ETERNAL SNOW or LOVE CHRONICLE by Chanin' My Life. But when I listen to a song 10 times, I switch it because it gets annoying even if it's my favorite song. But...

I hope this answers your question, nya. XD